| "Using Your Head" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: jynnantonnix [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2004 09:06 CDT
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You could expand this into a whole huge story, you know... hint hint. This is great, you're portrayal of Ayame is always on target ^_^
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Reviewed By: Deadly Wispers [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2004 03:20 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love that: "Little Brother's Princess" that part was SO funny! ^^
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Reviewed By: Deadly Wispers [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2004 03:02 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG, that was SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO FUNNY!!!! ^____________________________________^ i like the fan fic so far, so now i shall start on the second chapter! ^^
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Title: cOoL SeQuEL!
Reviewed By: Hatori's AnGeL [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2003 02:56 CST
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awww... tnks for the cool sequel!!! *smothers a grin* about the shy type theory u have... uhmmm ermm.. yes i can attest that its true *blush...kicks dirt on floor* anyway... i really liked the sequel and how u made tohru a bit more human! i mean... the naughty sexy lingerie and all makes her character more believable (i mean like NOBoDY is that sweet innocent and naive right?) also it would be really nice if u'd pursue the concept story u mentioned... *looks all puppy eyed and begs...* anyway it has been quite a while and im glad to read another story from u! *coughs* been too busy with my studies to concentrate on my own story... gomen! anyway... hope to hear/read more from u!!! Good luck to all your endeavors! CIAO!!!
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Title: For moi????
Reviewed By: R junkie On: October 25, 2003 04:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOL Ok, maybe that wasn't the reaction you were looking for but I can't get over Tohru and crotchless pantines engraved all for YUki! KAWAIIIIIIIIIIIIII. OK wrong adjective but It was soo cute. Little Yuki the voyeur fairy prince! THANK YOU SO MUCH for finally writing it. and for me! I'm so happy! URESHIIII! I love it and though it was less graphic than I was hoping for (yes I'm a prevert) but it was perfect. Tells you enough to know that the two are MEANT for each other! YUKIRU forever! Don't be unhappy with it. It was perfect, now go on and put other Fruits basket lemon authors to shame!! Grabs *pompoms* GANBATTE KUDASAI...er..I think
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Title: Amazing ^^
Reviewed By: Kamino [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2003 21:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was really good ^^ very few spelling errors! I think I'm a bit biased on the matter, I root for Kyou, and that might of affected my grading ^^; But it is really good! You captured their personalities perfectly |
Reviewed By: Lady Sesshoumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2003 11:49 CDT
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*snickers* I know, I know...your parting line was completely innocent. Now, let me introduce you to my husband, Naraku... Quadratic equations? I have nightmares about that equation. -b plus/minus the square root of b squared minus 4 times a times c...or something like that, along with the division by 2 times a or something *laughs* It's been tooooo many years since I've used that. I hope to never use it again! |
Title: KAWAII!!!!
Reviewed By: Hatori's AnGeL [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 1969 18:00 CST
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KAWAII!!! Wow Tsukitani-san... that was really really cool and cute! AND YAY!!! I saw my beloved Ha-san too! You can borrow him ANYTIME... *grin*
I really loved the pun at the end *laughs head off* Wow, Yuki finally gets some action! Such a pity though that we weren't given an inside view of the *happenings* inside Tohru's room... *sigh* I bet it was very *interesting*
ALSO, glad to see Ayame-kun... and Poor, Shigure, neglected again... Though I'm sure you took *care* of that... hehehe... BTW, still waiting for your latest FOD update!
Anyway, another awesome job by the GREAT Tsukitani-san! |
Reviewed By: Lady Sesshoumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 1969 18:00 CST
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Haha! The last pun was great, well, *I* laughed at it. I loved this, very cute ^^ |
