| "Of Gods and Monsters" Reviews/Comments [ 161 ] |
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Reviewed By: JMaxwell [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2009 21:22 CDT
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So close, and yet so far. Fun while it lasted. Here's an idea for Chapter 58. Rock fall. Everyone dies.
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Title: *sobbing*
Reviewed By: Titiana [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2009 00:53 CST
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2 years, that's all I'm saying. Is everything ok? Maybe give us an author's note so that we know you're ALIVE!!! But really now I sort of don't care about the story and am hoping that you are alright. (I mean I CARE about the story and want to read the ending but... I would rather hear that you are alright than have the next chapter, we're here for you and we love you... as much as you can when it's somebody you only know via alias and online)
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Reviewed By: Titiana [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2008 12:29 CST
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For the love of all that is holy FINISH the story I am begging you... nicely... but begging!!!
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Reviewed By: WolfPad [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2008 02:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
While indeed it has been a long long time since you've updated this, I can't but feel two things. 1. That I read an entirely different ending to this before (which perplexes me, unless someone else totally ganked your story and changed it at their whim). and 2. Thank you are lacking in the review department quite seriously. I mean, honestly, this is, quite possibly, one of THE BEST InuYasha fanfics out there, not to mention THE best Sesshomaru portrayal in the IYfic world. So I'd have to say I'm a little miffed at the lack of reviews you have on here. I first started following this story way back when it was originally posted on ff.net (but they suck anyway *sticksouttongue* who needs 'em?), and I thought I'd found it later after you'd finished it, but perhaps I was mistaken? I don't know. Either way, I still would like to compliment you on a fanfiction well written, and even though it has been many many many months since you've updated this, know that there are still fans of this story out there more than willing to pick up reading where you've left off (and I know I speak for more than just myself here when I say that). Your writing style is practically flawless, your plot is well thought out, and your characterizations are very believable and well written. Overall, I think this fic deserves far more than 10 measly points, but if that is all I'm allowed to put, then put it I shall. Best of luck to you! -WolfPad
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Reviewed By: Anonymousx On: May 02, 2008 13:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your a great writer. May you write greater things in †he future.
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Reviewed By: snowecat(not signed in) On: September 27, 2007 20:35 CDT
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Please come back, Hera needs to be taken down a few pegs. What will happen to the baby? Will Teles ever become a goddess again?
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Reviewed By: snowecat(not signed in) On: July 11, 2007 16:31 CDT
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You're going to finish this, right? Please come back soon, I really love this story.
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Reviewed By: Resilience [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2007 20:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great title, great plot, great storyline, fantastic lemons, fantastic originality, everything is absolutely great/fantastic! The humor in it is great, the knowledge of everyhting in there (pregnancy, greek gods, greece itself, etc) is really cool. Its all in fantastic detail, and i don't see why there aren't anymore reviews than this. its such a great story and you are totally #1 of my fave author's on mm.org.
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Title: AWESOME
Reviewed By: RabidAnimeGurl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2007 00:45 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Long awaited, but everything I wanted and more. I'm rather wait forever for an update than have none at all. Great chapter.
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Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2007 09:26 CST
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“...Why?†“Hell if I know. Bwaaahahahahahaha!
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Title: At last indeed...
Reviewed By: Charlie The Otaku Nymph [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2007 00:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What can I say that hasn't already been said? While that wasn't the best chapter, it was one of the top. Absolutely beautiful.
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Reviewed By: Cynbad146 On: January 18, 2007 23:36 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter! I really enjoyed the details of how the birth was affecting everyone. Also, I was so happy to get to read the update and that you have definite plans to finish the story. Fantastic tale! Cynbad146
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2007 23:33 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well I see all that research helped a lot! That felt real on this side of the computer screen!
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Reviewed By: myeerah [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2007 18:47 CST
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Delightful. :D I'm glad to see an update, and even happier with the beginnings of some closure.
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Reviewed By: purplerebecca [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2007 16:11 CST
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eYEYAYAYAY! The baby is finally born! ^__^ That was painful and excellent. w00t.
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Reviewed By: BladesoftheValkyrie [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2007 15:55 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY!!!! I've been waiting for this update for what seems like forever, and seing the notification in my email has made my day. Great work as always, and I can't wait for the next chapter! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Novasy On: January 11, 2007 21:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
This had the ability to be a GREAT story. But when you made Teles HUMAN, it destroyed the story for me. it took away all of you uniquness shes pretty damn boring now.
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Title: PS
Reviewed By: Battousais gal [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2006 00:02 CST
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Oh. OH! In addition, several of your chapters had me crying today. Chapter 44 REALLY sticks out in my mind. And by crying...well, I mean BAWLING my eyes out. Seriously. Not a word of a lie.... Good stuffs, hope to see another chapter up *soon*! ^^
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Title: -Pout.-
Reviewed By: Battousais gal [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2006 23:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was a LOT of reading in two days. I mean, WHOA. o.o Honestly, though, I was utterly enamoured by this story. -Pouts.- You know what a totally AWESOME Christmas (Holiday, for those that put up a stink over it) present would be? Another chapter of this glorious fic. I'm marking you into my favourites as soon as I post this comment. My boyfriend--recently caught into the spell of Inu Yasha fics--is on chapter ten or eleven. He's enjoying it as well. Please, DO post up another chapter soon, though I do know life gets in the way. ;P By the way, a round of applause to your betas, even though there's just a few things here and there that would require fixing. Kudos! -Waves, posts, and favouriteseseses.- ^___^
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Title: PS
Reviewed By: BladesoftheValkyrie [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2006 17:44 CST
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I also love the Greek mythology you included - I know a bit about it myself, and I love what you've done with it in your story. ...and I really can spell nauseous, lol.
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Title: Pretty o_O
Reviewed By: BladesoftheValkyrie [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2006 17:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is so... pretty. o_O I was leery about reading it at first because, as you pointed out, you have an original character - BUT IT WORKS. It's PERFECT. When I saw the chapter entitled "Sesshoumaru: Karma's bitch," I just about died laughing. You style of writing is wonderful, with a plethora of different words to tickle the senses and prevent the reader from going comatose. Your story has made me laugh out loud and cry (which has never happened to me while reading a fanfic before), and I was extremely depressed when I reached the last chapter you have posted. I would have reviewed this story before now, but I was simply too busy clicking the "next button" at the end of the chapters instead. I was slightly addicted and compelled to read "just one more chapter." o_O Right. Anyway, I'm sure you're slightly nautious from all of the praise I've just heaped upon you, so I'll wait to write more until after the next chapter is posted (I can't wait! :). Again, very well done!!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: RedLadyDragon On: September 16, 2006 20:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Congratulations!!! I've had so much fun with this story, it's almost sad to see it end... except I can't wait to find out what happens. Dilemma, dilemma... I love, love, LOVE how you're combining the Inuyasha story with the original Greek mythology. Similar but different solution to the problem using the tools at hand. ^.^ Also, the ending sequence of this one? Priceless.
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Reviewed By: Dea Mariella [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2006 16:31 CDT
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oh...this was a great chappie! (congrats to your wedding!) i don't even know how to describe what i liked about this chappie; i just love the way that you have the characters interact in this story. it's very believable. and the whole sealing thing with kags...artwork indeed. how she has to get pissed to do it? i love it. aphrodite would be a pain to deal with on a regular basis, i would think...she's just such a smart ass! :D but i do like her suggestion for what to do with the hydra afterwards. that's a really good idea. and leaves hera with less in her arsenal. why is it that hera is so obsessed with this ex-goddess? and a minor goddess at that! she needs to take some prozac and get a life. that's the final verdict! until next time... Dea-chan
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Reviewed By: cookiegal On: August 16, 2006 12:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! Teles is gunna have the pup! Please let everything work out for the good! And congrats on your marriage! I can't wait till I get married...(daydreams)
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Reviewed By: RabidAnimeGurl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2006 03:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Of all the places to end the chapter...You have quite a cruel mind for that. Anyway, I hope you can update soon.
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Reviewed By: BlyssfulStorm On: August 10, 2006 23:00 CDT
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YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You have got to be the only author who takes forever to update and not only do I NOW get mad about it, I remember EXACTLY where you left off! And congradulations on your marriage! My you have a long and happy one.
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Reviewed By: Manderz [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2006 22:31 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Congratulations again on getting married! ^o^ Wonderful work on the action scenes in this chapter, I really love the descriptions you used. I always laugh so hard when Sesshoumaru gets all concieted xD I don't know how many times I've said this before but Teles is just the perfect match for him--it's unbelievable. Your characterization skillz are to be reckoned with!! Ahh, reading your writings always makes my day ^___^ I can't wait for the next update!
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Reviewed By: InuDemoness (not signed in) On: August 10, 2006 15:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You got married!? Yay! A wedding, I love weddings; cake all around! But about the story; you are absolutely brilliant! I love the humor in your writing; when Sesshoumaru asked Teles if there was anything from her land that wasn't immortal I cracked up. You write actions scene so well, I could picture and follow everything. To quote Obicat, you have some serious story writing mojo. If you ever do write professionally I'll buy every one of your books, with cash! I love you and can't wait for the next update; though I am sad that the story is almost over.
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Reviewed By: Cynbad146 On: August 09, 2006 23:33 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fantastic two chapters! Five more chapters, maybe? I was so happy to see your update. It has been such a wonderful story. The interplay between the characters, while dealing with the slurs from the villagers and during the battle scene, was so creative. The battle scene had me laughing and biting my nails at the same time. I know that you will be excited and sad when the story is completed. I definitely have enjoyed reading your work. Thank you ever so much for sharing with us. Cynbad146
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Reviewed By: kitsunegari On: August 09, 2006 21:35 CDT
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[two thumbs up and big grins] Most excellent. More as fast as you can write it will be very very nice. ;b
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