| "Haima" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Reviewed By: pennypigeon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2007 16:51 CDT
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love it, have you ababdoned/bad spelling/ it?
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Reviewed By: Shinigami24 On: August 22, 2005 03:20 CDT
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At first i thought it was Crawford, now i'm not so sure...Because when all the action was going down, he was talking with Seto and Joey...I know this kiler is very smart, so Dartz? I think the killer might be either Dartz or Crawford...
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Reviewed By: Beysie (*gasps* it's letting me review!) On: January 24, 2005 00:37 CST
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Wow... it's been quite a while since you last updated, thanks! I'm so curious to know how Jou is going to solve this one. I can't wait! It's amazing what a sharp mind his has behind that joking mask he puts up, ya know! And poor Otogi! Just when he was about to get away, he's shoved to his death... I think... it wasn't all that clear after all. Poor boy... update soon, ok?
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Reviewed By: Beysie [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2004 13:23 CST
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Yay, you finally updated! I was beginning to worry... I love this fic! I feel so bad for Otogi... he didn't deserve this! How cruel the bad guy is! No, I still haven't figured out who it is, but I have my ideas... I won't speak of them yet. (actually, I may have to re-read this whole thing to refresh my memory!) *grins* Update soon please! Hopefully sooner than this last one... two months is an awfully long time to make us wait!
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Reviewed By: Beysie [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2004 00:31 CDT
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Ooh, keep the mystery commin! I'm pretty sure that the killer is someone high up in the chain of command within the police system, but I don't think it's someone you've introduced properly yet... Ahh, like I said before, I'm not very good at solving mysteries by myself... Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Beysie [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2004 02:08 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, just finished reading the whole thing... 13 chapters, in about 2 hours or so... I got caught right up in the thing! Can't wait for the next update! I'm hooked on this mystery, and haven't been able to figure out who the killer is yet! Oh, and if you decide to put anything lemony or fluffy between Seto and Joey, keep it for when the killer has been caught... only my idea, of course... ^_^;
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Reviewed By: DirtyD Momma Cat On: September 22, 2004 00:42 CDT
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I have to say I had no hope for a while that this story would ever get finished. I'm glad to see that you haven't quit just merely neglected it. Ahhh, yes in the dark once again, but not because I'm confused but because I forgot alot of things. ^_^; It would be really convinent if you didn't wait 4 months for another update. Yes, I'm a no good smartass but I can't remember it all. Though I know enough to follow. Interesting chapter, Shizuka in the infamous triangle sort of deelly(not a word I know). When is Katsuya gonna talk to Seto again... hmmm? Great read, still... wheres Marik? Whats he doing in the story besides scaring Malik? Is that their names in this? So many questions...
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Reviewed By: Momma Cat [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2004 00:57 CST
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Here me am! LOL. Cute lil' ending for the chapter. With the Katsuya plushie anyway. ^_^ Awaiting the next chap. Always! And no, you didn't give the killer away yet, is it Noa?
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Reviewed By: TechnicalDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2004 19:43 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pleaze update!!!
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Reviewed By: Momma Cat [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2003 21:26 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
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Good story, though a bit confusing for my feeble mind at times, but I make do. -_- I think its ok if you don't do a lemon, I can live without. Just give me some fluff already! Pweaseeeeee?
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Title: Momma Cat
Reviewed By: Momma Cat [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2003 02:21 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Where is the sappy love story? Where is the lemon? Where is the next chapter? Why isn't it written yet? Why am I annoying you with lame questions? Why do I think this is great? Because it is. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Split Persona-The Ones and Onlies [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2003 11:57 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
JC: Great start, we love how this looks to be turning out.
Kathrine: Poor Jou, he could be the next victim. Great!!! ^_^
JC: And what does poor Shizuka have to do with this? Hmmmm... Oh the possibilities.
Kathrine: And Jou's first name IS Katsuya, just they call him by his last name. They do it with Bakura too so...
JC: They did it with Kuwabara from YuYuHakusho so maybe some people are just called by their last names instead. *Shrugs*
Kathrine: Anyway, we love how you have done so far. Keep up the great work! ^_^ |
