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Reviewed By: kagsessdaughter Silver [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2005 11:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
ooooooooooooo i like
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Title: Damn!
Reviewed By: Yami 396 (not logged in) On: September 07, 2005 08:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow....this is excellent. The best! 10's all the way!
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Title: And I thought...
Reviewed By: Dee-chan (unsigned) On: June 04, 2005 17:30 CDT
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When I thought my days of writing unconstructive, gushy reviews were at an end, this story was brought to my attention, and...here I am, sorely tempted to go back to that style because it seems like the clearest way to express how much I enjoyed reading this. Admittedly, there were quite a few careless errors that you could easily fix with a careful re-read or a beta-reader. (I'm offering!) Overall, though, this seems like either an inspired work or a story that was very well-thought out. In the end the loose threads tied themselves up as nicely as a plot from a Diana Wynne Jone's novel. You really emphasized the tight Souma family bond, some might say too much, but it was heart-warming. Again, I truly enjoyed reading this fanfic--and I know nothing about either series. You did a great job.
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Reviewed By: Jazmin On: September 11, 2004 16:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*insert many squeels here* ah love you;.; Most AMAZING WONDERFUL fanfic EVER!!! Is the sequel gonna focus around the same two series or are you going to ex one of them out and maybe add another? Well either way I know D and Leon's story won't end happy unless Leon either turns immortal or D stops being a Kami^.^;; I deffinantly want to see more of this Kyou/Kagura/Yuki/Tohru pairing you're pulling together, it's very exiting because people don't usually touch the poly subject... So yes, hopefully there will be more of that! And deffinantly more drama and romance for Shigure and Akito(*crowd goes "aww!"*) And more stuff about the children from Black Scorpion, that would be cool too^.^ Well that's all I can think to say, and I know I speek for all your readers when I say thank you so much for writing such a wonderful fanfic!
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Title: Featured Fanfic
Reviewed By: RabidFan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2004 21:19 CDT
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I have a proposal to make. *get big teary eyes* Please may I please submit you too the featured fanfics!!!! I love this fic it should be featured!!! And judging by the number of reviews you get others think so too. PLEASE?!?!?! There just not enough good Fruits basket stuff so I think others should at leeast see some good Furuba,,,not to mention Pet Shop of Horrors. Yes..No..*say yes say yes say yes...* ---Rabid
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Reviewed By: KyoKyo866 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2004 15:33 CDT
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the end.. the two most hurtful words in this whole story.. i laughed.. i cried.. goes straight with the story.. U R UNDOUBTLY THE GREATEST AUTHOR(ESS) ON THE FACE OF THE EARTH!!
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Title: To: Immortal Evil Fanfic Chibi
Reviewed By: RabidFan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2004 19:13 CDT
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Thanks for the info! I cried also!!!!!! Especially when Hana had to keep pushing Tohru away because she had to and all that! That was the saddest episode, and I accidentally thought it was the last one(it wasn't of course, cried my eyes out:). ---Thanks Rabid
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Title: The end
Reviewed By: RabidFan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2004 19:08 CDT
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Good ending! I read your story up to the final word and have enjoyed it all the way!!!!!^_^!!!! I'm sad its over! I hope you can do another Fruits Basket story! Thanks! Love and Hugs-Rabid
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Reviewed By: Akari and Kurai [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2004 07:28 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I decided to read this story again and review each chappie. This chapter is so sad. It made me cry when Hatori's dad hurt Shigure. Poor Shi-san... ~Akari
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Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2004 02:51 CDT
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Great story. Wonderful. I just read it all. Keep up the great work.
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Title: =^-^=
Reviewed By: Sterling On: July 26, 2004 12:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That's the end!? WAHHHH! I bow dowm before your greatness. You were able to have everything come together nicely. Everything was interlocking. There were no loose ends or anything. You should really try and get some of your works published or something. You writing style is absolutely AMAZING! The only thing I have to complain about is the Michael thingy...a strawberry? *shakes head* Nope, I don't really think that that works, but of course that is just my opinion, and doesn't actually matter ^_~ You don't think there there is any way that I can persuade you to write anoter PSOH/FB crossover ne? Or maybe something w/ the characters of Last Exile? Maybe? PLEEEEEEEASE? Do you accept American Express or Visa? j/k Oh well. I still love your work, and I am now going to go and read all the fics that you have done. ^_^ Keep up the awesome work!
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Reviewed By: Meandering [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2004 03:58 CDT
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It's over... Thank you for this story, I loved it. I'm actually quite happy with the Yuki/Kyou sort of pairing, and you have a great fic there. I hope Akito and Shigure DO manage to have a happy relationship. I love Happy Endings, and it means so much more after you suffer. Thanks again. Great Chapter.
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Title: eep!
Reviewed By: madame shannon On: July 25, 2004 19:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ohmigosh!!! i'm so happy that long denied is finished but i'm so sad that it's over!!! wow, your story was finished. I cried at the end! i can't express myself in words so i will just say thank you. here is a rose for you @---^--- now the one thing that would make my life complete is if you would finish How Long Love!
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Reviewed By: Immortal Evil Fanfic Chibi [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2004 13:11 CDT
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to RabidFan, I've heard rumers about a season 2, but I do know that the anime ends halfway through the manga... I don't know about you, but I balled like a baby at the ending, I'm not ashamed to say so either... Kyo looks like a T-rex with bunny ears!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Immortal Evil Fanfic Chibi [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2004 21:03 CDT
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YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YOU UPDATED AS SOON AS I ASKED YOU TOO!!!!!!!!!!! NOW YOU CAN DO IT AGAIN!!!!!!! *waits hopefully (for three seconds) then shruggs* Well... I tried... but... ohmygotitwassoawesomeandhowcouldyouleaveitatthatcliffyyouevilperson,butInee d(notice NEED not WANT)thenextchaptersojusthurryupandwriteitok? *grin* I have had sugar... I am hyper and I am talking very fast so the words are not spaced... I must now go drink coffee!
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Title: F33l the 3vil
Reviewed By: RabidFan notloggedin On: July 12, 2004 18:49 CDT
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I'm happy and sad at the same time! I just watched the last Fruits Basket anime vol. 4. I liked it and I thought it ended nicely but I'm soooooo sad it's over!!!!! I'm going to sue Funimation for making me cronically depressed. But I just got the third manga book so I'm also happy! La! Kyou is so hot on the cover *drools* actually he's always hot. HEHEHEH. ---bai bai---Rabid P.S. Do you know if FB anime is going to have a second season?
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Reviewed By: RabidFan notloggedin On: July 12, 2004 18:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
How could you write such an evil cliffy?!? How dare you!*strangles author*. Just kidding, if I killed you I would never know the ending! I hope you do another Kyou pov. I'm really curious! Give the Zodiac more time because Jill and Leon are pissing me off because they dont know whats going on and are having bad missunderstandings (not like thats their falt..)! I'll be sad once the story is over. I hope you'll do another story on Furuba! hmmm, I hope the characters have happy endings even though I know thats not your style. I hope Kyou doesn't become more lonely because he's become a god-like-thing(or whatever he is). Oh yeah please tell us what happens to Kureno and Uo I know that part was tiny but Kureno is so F*ked up. I hope his life gets better. And Shigure's life! Poor shigure, he is soooo misunderstood. I hope he and Akito get together. And Leon and Count D too, they are scarily meant for each-other. Hmmmm can you kill Rin for me? She such a poopy-stupid-ugly-mean-cruel *beep*. Sorry. I just shouted a lot of obscenities it's a good thing know one is in my house. Heh heh. Well those are my oponions! Thank you for your lovely contribution ot the Fruit Basket fics.
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Reviewed By: ThisisMeandering On: July 12, 2004 03:43 CDT
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I can't log on... somehow my PC always closes me down... Great chapter, but why do I get the feeling you're running away from Kyou being 'hatched', or do you just like making us wait, hmm? Anyway, MORE!
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Reviewed By: Immortal Evil Fanfic Chibi [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2004 20:36 CDT
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*blushing* that was suppost to be AGAIN!!! Oopse... Oh well I'm just glad it finnally worked! *tosses her computer and Mediaminer each an electronic treat.* YAY!!!
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Reviewed By: Immortal Evil Fanfic Chibi [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2004 20:34 CDT
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It cut off my review ADAIN!!!!!!!!! EVIL COMPUTER AND EVIL MEDIAMINER REVIEW PROGRAM!!!! *yakes a break then returns* Let's hope it works this time... Ok what I was going to say... I think... was " "Great and All Powerfull Mighty Authoress of Fanfiction" (which is a title reserved for few authors and you're in the top three) Cousin D." I had a lot more but my computer ate it and is being mean to me... so I'm just going to leave it at that. I almost used up all of my 1500 characters too!!! Darn! Ok that about concluded my extra super large review. (I've never done a review this large before! I feel proud of myself... even though I'm really just rambiling about how good a writer you are and how you shouldn't keep people waiting so long for updates 'cus it drives them insane ^_^) I'll review again next chapter! BYE!!!
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Reviewed By: Immortal Evil Fanfic Chibi [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2004 20:32 CDT
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It cut off my review... darnit... ok what I was going to say... I think... was " "Great and All Powerfull Mighty Authoress of Fanfiction" (
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Reviewed By: Immortal Evil Fanfic Chibi [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2004 20:25 CDT
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*looks at the review below her* ... Oh Hi Katsu! Long time no see? How's the Guild on Gaia doing? I haven't been able to go on lately. Sorry... ^_^0 OK... back to busness... *calmly gets on her knees and attaches herself to Cousin D's right leg* PLEASE UPDATE SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOON! HOW CAN YOU BE SO EVIL AND JUST END A CHAPTER LIKE THAT?! HOW COULD YOU?!?!?!?!?!?! YOU EVIL PERSON! YOU HAVE ME(actually everyone who reads more than the first sencence but a, the list would be too long and b, I'm just selfish that way) AT YOUR MERCY!!!!!!!! EVIL COUSIN D, EEEEEEVIL!!!!!!!!!!!! *looks up and says in a small and quiet voice* I know you care alot about quality and it really does show... but could you maby try a little super-extra hard and update a little sooner than planned... I can't wait. *calmly removes herself from Cousin D's appendage and goes to man her shrine to both the fanfic and the (as I put it) "Great and All Powerfull Mighty Authoress of Fanfiction" (
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Reviewed By: _Katsu_ On: July 07, 2004 11:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dying... I'm dying from the cliffhanger ending of the latest chapter... slowly, painfully dying... There's not much I can say that hasn't been said already, whether praise... or well, more praise. I'm quite sure I'm going to go mad, and then I won't be able to read the next chapter!!! AHHH!!! *passes out*
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Reviewed By: ThisisMeandering On: June 30, 2004 04:27 CDT
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YOU EVIL PERSON! Leaving us hanging like that! Grrrr! *stomps off and blows things up, then stomps back* You better write more! OOC: This is Meandering. I haven't logged in.
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Title: OMG OMG OMG
Reviewed By: RabidFan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2004 01:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I literally read this chapter and said OMG. I don't ussually do that just to tell you. Anyways WOW this is such a great story (I keep thinking that). I want to find out the ending but at the same time I never want it to end. The story makes so much sense tho. You make it sound like it would be immpossible to incorporate both your stories (petshopofhorrors and FB) but you tie it up perfect. Thank you for this great addition to fruits basket stories! Please make more in the future!
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Reviewed By: Jexia [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2004 20:50 CDT
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Another great chapter chock full o' content. Angst, family feeling, mystery, revelations. And Kyou fighting his way out of the cocoon. What a pleasure it was to see that you updated. I'm happy that Ayame had such kind and loving words for Shigure. Poor Shigure, so loving and devoted himself, to hate himself. He deserves something better for his fidelity.
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Reviewed By: Youkai Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2004 11:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow another great chapter. This story is getting better and better with every chapter, and i can't wait for the reaction of the Souma family to Kyou's change. Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Jexia [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2004 08:39 CDT
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Well, I've read the balance of this novel in the past two days and I have to say that I simply love it--the angst,the tenderness, the complexity, the overall creativity in terms of flow and the near seamless joining of the two worlds--spectacular work. I love the sensitivity you show, not to mention the psychological and emotional insight, ooh, glad I remembered to throw that in. This is such a colorless review for such a vibrant story that kept me up until midnight last night and got me up at 5:15 this morning, to finish reading. That should give you a better idea of just how compelling I thought your story was. (What? How come I didn't stay up to finish reading?) Eyes like sandpaper and I wanted to have the joy of reading the two chapters that remained when I was better rested. They were to be savored like one of the delicacies brought to Count D, by his beloved Leon. Suffice it to say, I am truly looking forward to the final unraveling of your wonderful fiction. Thanks for the hard work you put into making it all seem so effortless.
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Reviewed By: Youkai Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2004 23:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please, Please, Please update this fic! I really want to find out what is going to happen, and right now I am on pins and needles waiting for an update. Keep up the good work, and please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Jexia [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2004 20:53 CDT
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Could the second chapter be even better than the first? This is great and Shigure's mourning with the wolves made me cry.
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