| "Cure for the Itch" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Title: Loved It!
Reviewed By: isabella36 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2011 17:02 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Amazing! I had to make an account just to say how much I enjoyed this. Great story. Love the way you write. The twist at the end was really good and very welcomed. There were a few moments throughout the story that sort of gave a little foreshadowing to it and I thought that was great. The story flowed really well. Definitely one of my favorite stories. |
Title: Cure for the Itch
Reviewed By: angelfire777 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2007 11:12 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What a hot and romantic one-shot! That is definitely how hentai should be written. I really loved this!
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Reviewed By: Kaoriel [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2006 18:42 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. That ending was a huge shock. Partway through, I noticed that you wrote he was screaming her name, and I was wondering how if he didn't know her, but... Then it was all explained. Excellent use of foreshadowing (whether it was accidental or on purpose), and just an excellent, excellent story.
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Title: Wonderful Story
Reviewed By: WickedGame [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2005 02:03 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I swear, this is one of the best adult fan fictions i have ever read. The writing is crisp and witty, the ending was a complete surprise (i am not normally a DBZ reader, even thought I loved the anime), and the length was very good. It was a genuinely fun read, and very hot.
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Reviewed By: quicken On: July 23, 2005 10:03 EDT
Comment/Review:
Very nicely written. This is the way hentai should be written, nice and hot with a bit of a plot.
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Reviewed By: moonwave (not logged in) On: July 08, 2005 13:41 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Perfect. I loved it. So well written! The twist at the end was just awesome! I've read plenty of hentai and this has got to be in the top 5! Keep writing!
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Reviewed By: ^-^ On: July 06, 2005 20:17 EDT
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How can this get any better? I have no idea. I wanna print this story out, but I'm afrad my dad'll find it....oh well! I'm gonna do it anyways. ^-^ I hope to see more from you! @ Namek Kaia andTrunks' Lover: I don't think many people read it, was probably either: a) They can't handle the hard-core hentie or b) They thought it too long, to acctualy read. What lazy, lazy, people. If it's hentie, I'll take the time to read it. ^^ I love Hentie alot. Over all, great job! ::insert thumbs up::
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Reviewed By: LadyLark [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2005 17:17 EDT
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Your story has been chosen as a featured fanfic here on Mediaminer for the following reason: Good grammar. Wonderful characterization. Original plot, for a PWP. And Hot. Just hot. This is the way Hentai should be written. Congratulations!
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Title: DBZ Rocks
Reviewed By: Trunks' Lover On: January 10, 2004 17:19 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this! i thought it was amazing! I got a bit confused by the twist at the end but i get confused reading the dictionary! But i loved it! i wish i could write that well! Please keep up the good work! I'd love to read more! And i can't believe only 4 people have reveiwed! I think that is cheek! It's brilliant!
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Reviewed By: Namek Kaia [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2003 22:06 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! Great stuff. And I mean really. It's been pretty cool here and I had to turn the fan on! lol. As always, you portrayed everything wonderfully. And I so totally LOVE the twist at the end. I knew it was a T/M, and I was wondering through the whole thing why you weren't using her name and why she would be a stranger to Trunks. ^^ But anyways. I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT!! :D Can't wait for another update! And this thing needs more reviews! I can't believe I'm only the third one! What is WRONG with these people?! *huffs* Again, great PPOE. ^^v |
Reviewed By: Ashley. On: September 10, 2003 23:25 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Super, super, super, ficcy!! I wish I could see action like that, lol!! Good job seriously though, you did a hella good job on it! Awww, now you made me like tm fics, shame on you (lol). Keep on writing all the wonderful fics! Good job again girlie |
Title: Awwww
Reviewed By: Mirai Marron [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2003 18:43 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice. This was rather sweet. I'm glad in some universes Trunks isn't totally a ginormous ass. :B Though mostly he is, but oh well.
Very well written. Keep up the good work! |
