| "What's In A Name?" Reviews/Comments [ 15 ] |
Reviewed By: EllyYuki On: May 07, 2012 03:37 EDT
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Omg, I think I took one to the stomach... It's scarily close to cannon. ><
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2008 03:41 EDT
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scary, sad, and oddly enough, quite true. Thanks for sharing this. Ja ne.
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Reviewed By: KAPUT On: August 18, 2006 15:03 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, I first read this in your profile at raygun.net but never really could review this story. Of course, I could have just emailed you but I'm lazy like that so I'm glad I found the Mediaminer fic. Hm, love the story and how you manage to keep them fairly in character. I'm a little irked by the dialogue though. Personally I find that if you put too much of a slurring accent (ie. S'ok m'baby blah blah blah) it makes it very difficult to read. I understand Duo's condition and WHY you chose to write his speech like that . . . but yes it was fairly difficult for me to keep my eyes on it.
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Reviewed By: Dark Sadistic Angel On: August 24, 2004 18:14 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Seriously good. The story has a real punch. DSA
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Reviewed By: RedHedLvr (not logged in) On: August 04, 2004 14:41 EDT
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Wow! Even though it's taken me a while to discover this story, it was fantastic. My heart aches for Duo, I just want to cuddle him to me and protect him (all of them really) from every evil in the world. As usual, you are the bomb! Incredible writing and oh so believable story line.
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Reviewed By: Indi D On: June 09, 2004 19:29 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This one really gave a realistic insight into duo, that will stay with me for some time to come. Nice
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Title: Amazing
Reviewed By: pyrzm [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2004 15:55 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow--just--Wow! You are an amazing writer!
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Reviewed By: animeotaku418 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2004 22:46 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow. im speechless....that was a really good peice of work. i like how you went back to duos past and talked about solo. you dont see alot of fics with solo...nice take on the charaters too. no one was outta character (except for the whole trowa/quatre thing but duh on that one.) anywho i hope that you will add another chapter to this. if you do i will read it imeadiatly.
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Reviewed By: Rurouni Lilouani [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2003 15:59 EST
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Damn. That was DEEP. I think I wanna cry. ***Huggles Duo-chan*** I don't think I can stress how well you portray your characters, especially Heero. You know how to get him to care, without getting him OOC. That's a skill many authors lack. Hope you appreciate your talent. It's a very touching fic. This is definitely gonna leave a lasting impression. Consider this a MASTERPIECE instead of just another one-shot. ~Wanders off mumbling something about DEEP SHIT~
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Reviewed By: sage_libra [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2003 09:22 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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Awww, touching. but its really begging for a sequel, mal, mally, MD, hey TAGs for you too! :)
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Reviewed By: Shella On: November 01, 2003 05:48 EST
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That ... that was excellent. Both thoughtful & thought-provoking -- I can already tell it's going to be one of those stories that stays with you. I can't positively say I've read a story with this theme before, but even if there was a story based on this idea I sincerely doubt it could be as memorable as this. Spelling, grammar, punctuation etc are all good. Characterisation is excellent, using the situation to avoid the almost caricature-style characterisation you get sometimes. Writing style is perfect -- the narrative is detail-weighty & very coherent, which makes Duo's disconnected dialogue stand out even more. I think starting new paragraphs often also helped keep it in that vague, doped-up, wandering frame of mind. Overall, I like this fic a lot. Kudos.
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Title: It's good
Reviewed By: Shadow_Kat [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2003 02:20 EDT
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I suppose that I should say that I really liked it...puts into perspective that every trait has a root and that not all of them are good. In every fic they mention how annoying all Duo's nicknames are irritating but this story give it a background that he's only protecting them...family. *Why do I have a picture of Stitch in my head mumbling 'Ohana'*
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: September 21, 2003 17:12 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmmm... I think this fic was ok. But I like the others you have writen best.
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Title: What's in a Name?
Reviewed By: moonraven [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2003 20:56 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow...that was something Trowa gave him, ne? Can he talk, or what?
That was really cool...A different take, if you will, on why Duo (in popular fandom) would use nicknames for people. I like that thought. Poor, baby.
I like the way you write Trowa too...He's such a dreamboat!!! *fangirl squeal*
*Ahem* gomen... |
Reviewed By: sapphire On: September 18, 2003 19:56 EDT
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intresting - i liked this |
