| "WALK LIKE A MAN" Reviews/Comments [ 23 ] |
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Reviewed By: Flamingo6584 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2005 17:10 CDT
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What a cute idea!!! I love it!!! Your writing style is fun. The only thing I would say is that there are a few grammatical things, although I am by no means the grammar queen. A beta would help a lot in that area. Plan to read the rest soon!!
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Title: It's Me Majin Sue
Reviewed By: majin sue [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2005 16:15 CST
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Sorry about starting this and stopping. I still have the chapters you've read....and i will repost them soon. Making it to my liking. I love where i'm taking this, but got sidetracked. Thanks for waiting.
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Title: More comming soon?
Reviewed By: Vegeta's Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2005 15:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic, and I can't help but wonder if you are going to continue it. For some reason I was thinking that there were more chapters after that last one.....something about Trunks going to the past and it ending up being a different time line and the androids had figured out how to assimilate humans.....or something like that. Anyway, you better update soon or I swear that I will...uh.....mmm....well I don't know what I'll do but it's gonna be bad. lol Love ya babe!
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Reviewed By: majin sue [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2005 20:25 CST
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Sorry for the typo's int this story. i was trying somthing diffrent and didn't do it correctly. There will be additonal chapters later on. I hope those wheo have come and visited this story are enjoying it.
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Title: It's Me Majin Sue
Reviewed By: majin sue [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2005 15:57 CST
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I know it had to end sometime. but fear not. I may have and ending to this. i have somting in my head but not sure how to introduce it. so stay tuned.
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Reviewed By: Elenek [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2004 08:44 CST
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That was so much fun. I loved the scene with the street sweeper. And Brittany running around hounding him... This is ending. I'm mad. -el-
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Reviewed By: Elenek [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2004 13:29 CDT
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Ok thing are comming to a head soon. The bad guy has got to go. I wonder how Trunks will react to it all. Keep writing!!!!! -El-
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Title: It's me Majin Sue
Reviewed By: majin sue [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2004 11:45 CDT
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sorry for now updating more often. i started school and trying to blance home, family, school and my writing has been a bit hetic. But i promis new chapters up soon . Thanks
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Reviewed By: BbyChick [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2004 07:19 CDT
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damn. you should get her to tell him when she proposes to him out of guilt or something. lol. or make him see all the suits in her closet and think they look like mike's. or make him meet her brother. just do something!
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Reviewed By: Elenek [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2004 21:12 CDT
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She's not gonna be able to hide it much longer is she? I can't believe Trunks actually hired her Ex. I'm really looking forward to Trunks going golden on his ass when he tries something against Mai. -El-
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Reviewed By: Elenek [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2004 16:14 CDT
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Ohhhhhhh boy. Things are gonna get messy. -El-
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Title: It's Me!!!
Reviewed By: majin sue [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2004 15:22 CDT
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Yep, this story is about to get crazy. Can't you tell? Thanks for the support on this one. You guys make writing fun.....
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Reviewed By: Satans Widdle Hellper [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2004 14:56 CDT
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Need more! EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!
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Reviewed By: Elenek [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2004 13:18 CDT
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Grin. That was sweet. You know what I like about your stories? I don't know where they are going. Other that the wide sweeping themes, I can only guess one chapter at a time. So MORE MORE MORE MORE. Thank You for writing. -El-
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Reviewed By: Elenek [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2004 10:02 CDT
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So many chances for things to come out. The suspense is killing me.
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