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Title: Sweet
Reviewed By: Caprice [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2008 20:11 CST
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I wonder if you still get these reviews, but anyhow, I always leave comments even if the story is very old. This was very well written and spicey. Your version of Vegeta is much more suave than others portrayed him. It reminds me of one of my first stories, Kiss of a Saiyan, although the scenario is completely different, I swear I was completely reminded of it... I hadn't even read this story when I wrote that though... I am a tad baffled.
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Title: sarah-slutz@hotmail.com
Reviewed By: Sarah Slutz On: December 12, 2007 15:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! This had me laughing all the way and wanting to know what happens next. Great story!!!!!
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Title: Great!
Reviewed By: Creator of the moon On: August 24, 2005 10:29 CDT
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Your fic is really good! We can truly sense their feelings as we're reading your story! I'm going right now to read After the kiss! oh yeah!
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Reviewed By: JE On: May 03, 2005 17:59 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
holy crap that was hot. im definitely reading the sequel, like RIGHT NOW!
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Reviewed By: Gohans_Onna [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2005 17:49 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lol, that was really cute. The end totally cracked me up...on to read the sequel....
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Title: Beautiful....
Reviewed By: fyrechylde [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2005 05:38 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I first read this on adimra's site and was floored. I liked the atmosphere with opera. I dunno, but it just gives such a flair to it. Not to mention that kiss! *whew* I look forwarding to reading more of your work! =)
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Title: some retroaction!
Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2004 13:28 CDT
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On my quest to leave feedback for fics I enjoyed in the past but didn't review! Read this one before AFK and remember that it was delightful, full of zingy humorous touches. Read it again today, with the tenderness of ATK in mind, and this piece seemed so much lovelier! The aha! moment of that highly romantic kiss is priceless--such a shot of pure endorphins for any jaded reader of B/V fics! Lovely, lovely story. debbiechan
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Reviewed By: bimbo n ditz On: April 22, 2004 09:48 CDT
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g8 work again well done! surfs up! ps it would b g8 if u still like dbz if u could chk our r fics and review em our penanme is bimbo and ditz bye byez surfs up
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Title: Great Fic!
Reviewed By: Vegge's Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2004 15:46 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I enjoyed your story. With the exception a few grammar mistakes, you write wonderfully. How you've had Vegeta act was interesting. I knew he had it in him to be charming. ^_~ It was a nice change from what I'm used to reading. The end was brilliant. Very nice indeed. I saw that this preluded "After the Kiss" so I'm going to check that out next. ~ Evelyn
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Reviewed By: skc On: January 11, 2004 02:03 CST
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ummm are u going to finish this?? lol its funny but i think vegeta should be more frank than that!!
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Title: All My Children!! :))
Reviewed By: Bardockgurl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2003 15:17 CST
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Oh, I loved this! I loved the interaction, and all the sarcastic, barbed little parries between them! The Alien duo from the Freeza days were a nice touch too... :D I thought it was great that one took on the form of a chair!! :D AND I loved the way that Bulma completely took him by surprise with the kiss!! A very good story - I'm off to read your second one later...
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Reviewed By: phantomscribe On: November 28, 2003 06:25 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I didn't even know you were a writer until you said something about it on the MB the other day. This was a hoot! I can just imagine Vegeta in a shopt getting fitted for a tux! I love the way your brilliant sense of humor came through in the fic too!
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Reviewed By: dragonzmoon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2003 16:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful writing, Lisa. I especially love the part where Vegeta's in a Tux! You made it seem like there's sexual eletricity between them in the end of the firsst chapter.
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Reviewed By: Cheryl On: October 17, 2003 07:28 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was wonderful! I smiled all the way through and I loved the ending. Well done!
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Title: Great story
Reviewed By: autumn [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2003 21:02 CDT
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Very well-written and in-character. I liked the premise and it was fun picturing Vegeta at the symphony and actually being polite. ha ha! I liked the end, too. Very nicely done.
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