| "Magic Carpet" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: Kix [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2004 03:04 CDT
Comment/Review:
i would not mind a sequil...but for now..i gota go cuddle with my own Marron *looks at beloved boyfreind* night night
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Reviewed By: Cody Thomas [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2003 20:53 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love you Miko! 'sigh' bishie goodness, yum!
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Reviewed By: Koujaku On: November 13, 2003 10:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wee i loved it!
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Reviewed By: Tygrrlyli578 On: November 02, 2003 13:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, if you've got a kickass idea, run with it. I think all the quirk introductions were done very well. In fact, I would be thoroughly disappointed if this stayed as it is as opposed to growing into a series fic. Please continue. I'm so curious as to why Marron is the way he is and just as curious as to what Gateau is going to do about it. Keep up the writing ^__^!!
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Reviewed By: skylier On: October 31, 2003 19:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey great story, makes me wander whats up with the hole Marron wanting him to go harder... pain over pleasure must now what that was about.. Please continue
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