| "Jihad Diaries" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Title: Author of this fic
Reviewed By: Dark_Phoenix_of_Chaos [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2005 15:25 PST
Comment/Review:
To Fionn "the otaku" For some reason, Mediaminer is not allowing my quotations to work. I do not have any clue as of why, but I will attempt to get this fixed soon. If you are having trouble go visit my other posting in "Fanfiction.net" under the name "Tatsu_no_Houou"
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Title: The Otaku
Reviewed By: Fionn On: January 14, 2005 14:16 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10
Comment/Review:
Desperatly needs quote marks.
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Reviewed By: sirtao On: May 20, 2004 17:50 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
mmm... è interessante, quanto meno e anzicheno. e' abbastanza il mio stile, anche se devo dire che la velocita' della storia è un po' troppo bassa per i miei gusti, in certe parti, specialmente il flashback... è veramente troppo lenta. Ma effettivamente un aumento della velocità cozzerebbe talmente tanto contro lo stile di scrittura che o si riscrive del tutto il capitolo o si accende un cero a San Gennaro, che non sarà il protettore dei fanficcari, ma nel dubbio, sempre a lui è bene accendere... poi lui informa chi di dovere. 7 perchè ha molte possibilità e sono convinto che siano sfruttabili.-
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Reviewed By: HyperMan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2004 08:06 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
More action, more, more, more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: Dark Lord of Diaries
Reviewed By: Canis Black [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2003 11:40 PST
Comment/Review:
Definitely an interesting start you've got going here Tatsu, keep it up and I think you'll have a hit on your hands.
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