| "Leftover Christmas" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Title: OMG
Reviewed By: SRP (not logged in) On: June 27, 2005 19:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!! That was sooo cute/sweet/and a little tear jerking....I felt so sorry for Kagome because she felt so out of place because she was 'growing up'..*tear*...write more Srp
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Reviewed By: Gothic Butterfly [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2003 18:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ahhh....So sweet :) I liked that one too, add a few more chapters? Onegi?
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Reviewed By: Crest Starlight [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2003 22:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was so sad. I actually started tearing up. So much emotion in such a simple form. I'm going off to college next year and this story flooded my mind with lots of memories and thoughts of the future. Very well done. Btw I'm stalking you now. *evil laughter as she scampers off to another one of your fics*
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Reviewed By: Precious [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2003 02:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked this fan fic because it focused on the little things that become big things when you're not aware of them. I can tell it took a lot of thought to base such a big part of the story around things that we have come to consider normal or everyday. I also like the sincere and slightly empathic InuYasha. Such wisdom seldom flows from lips. And you definatly kept the mother in character. All in all...good job.
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