Reviewed By: deeds [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2010 21:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice. but her eye was injured b4 onigumo perished and transformed into naraku. other than that lil detail, i liked the feel of the story, and thought it was nicely done, could even go further, if u've a mind to.
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