| "Whispered Dreams" Reviews/Comments [ 261 ] |
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Title: chapter 11
Reviewed By: BelleDayNight [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2004 00:56 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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With the title, I just knew I would have tears welling up in my eyes. I think Tensaiga will work on the night when Kagome is whole! Bc her body didn't really die, bc the Shikon just sort of made her into a new entity. So glad Yasha is in on the secret, especially since Kags is being ignored by Sesshou. But, he's pretty heart broken at the moment. And what he did for Yasha with the firefly was precious! Such a sweet big brother moment! I can't wait for the scene between Yasha and Kagome...and a villain...shesh...write write write! This story is one of my absolute favs! So much potential and passion. Great job!
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Reviewed By: vixinkitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2004 18:21 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is bad for Sessho-kun... Inu-Yasha found out his secret. I wonder... sense Kikyo and Kagome look alike might Sesshomaru kill the priestess and use it for Kagome's vessel? Plus this only brings out my hatred for the dead witch. Never liked her anyway... Update soon I have no idea what day it is though. Until then!
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Reviewed By: E.G, On: August 19, 2004 07:18 EDT
Comment/Review:
UPDATE PLLLLEEEEAAAaaSSSSEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2004 03:20 EDT
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OOh Daham.. Great chapter. Don't tell me he falls in love with her. Cause then Sess really will kill him. That was the whole reason why he was mean to Inu. He didn't want him finding his Kagome. Why do you think he barred the kid from coming. Man Sess is probably going to be called by the song too. Maybe not out of the shadows but once he sees or smells Inu, expect a fight. Great story. I love it. Keep up the great work. Cools Beans.
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Reviewed By: Aitu-- not signed in On: August 18, 2004 19:04 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ouuuu! LOVES IT! I'm glad that there was a new chapter, hehehe. Love how you concentrate on everything that you do-- it just seems to focus on all of the stuff that I want to read. I loved that little flash back with Sesshoumaru being nice to Inuyasha, awww. hehehe Keep up the great work! I can't wait to read more! It was utterly fabulous =D Til' next time---Aitu
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Reviewed By: CRyStaLtears [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2004 10:31 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
if the rating went even higher, i would give the highest number for this fanficcy. PLeASe UPDATE!!! i really like the plot of this sessho/kago story. and this is my favorite coupling!!! UpDatE SoOn!!!!(^-^''')
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Reviewed By: YASMIN On: August 18, 2004 09:02 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg omg omg omg OMG i cant wiat for the next chapte r, sesshy is gonna be furious !! woo-hoo , how the hell you gonna bring kagome back , thats what u wanna know lol
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Reviewed By: jc On: August 18, 2004 04:22 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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i seriously kawaii story! very original and makes sense. I like the way you had Inuyasha start to investigate and how he found out from the sword maker and stuff, you know, made a good plot line. look foward to more updates and longer chapters!
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Title: YAY!!
Reviewed By: Fallen-666-Angel On: August 18, 2004 02:36 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fallen: YAY!! You updated woohoo! All hail the all mighty CF-Sama muse to the wonderful Youkai Yume-Sama. I bring you loads of chocolate for the most wonderful chapter. ::hands over a mountan of chocolate of all kinds:: Lee: yeah right you just want them to update faster. Fallen: hmph says you. Lee: where did you get all that chocolate any ways? Fallen: ummm..... well... Nikki: HEY!!! WHERE'S ALL MY CHOCOLATE!! Fallen: ::sweat drops:: hehehe uh.. gottogobye. ::takes off running:: Lee: ::smirks:: well we may or maynot see her again but I wouldn't worry to much shes fast. ::remembers what kind of youkai both are:: uh ::sweat drops:: well then again... which ones faster kitsune or neko? hmm dont know well geuss you'll just have to wait to find out ne? ::a streak of teal, blue, and purple runs by followed by a streak of tan, maroon, and green:: Lee: hurry please. 'Note sarcasum' ::evil grin::
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Reviewed By: Shinobi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2004 01:47 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ohhh, a new chapter. I'm so happy. Whats going to happen next?
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Title: OO
Reviewed By: sesshoumaru lover1 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2004 21:15 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AHHHHHHH NUUUUUU! not the evil cliffies! T-T they are so torturous! you better post soon, or else the star charater gets it! >:} p.s great work X3
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Title: Update soon!
Reviewed By: Katrinalove14 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2004 19:47 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great new chapter...but i want to see what happens! I hope ou update soon...I keep reading this story on this site and fanfiction but when one gets updated the other doesn't for a while...the other one is only on ghost stories chapter....i hope you update the story soon! byez
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Reviewed By: Lain of the Azure Sky [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2004 18:06 EDT
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dammit no O.O! ::has a breakdown:: what an evil place to end T_T. I hope you update sooon. Oh, yeah I looked at your art the other day here, and its really well done and cool lookin'. Well..no more to say except that I'll try to be patient... ::goes off to read your other fics::
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Reviewed By: dmak [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2004 15:08 EDT
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you are so evil for ending this chapter in a cliffy!!!!! but, just like any good drug, i go through withdrawal without reading a story of yours, so don't worry, i'll be back!!! you are an awesome author, and an awesome artist as well! ok just a little question - i've always wondered, what does OOC stand for? PLEASE update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Reseii On: August 02, 2004 11:38 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is sooooo.. good! ^^ I can't wait for the next chapter.. though, I'll probably have to. And your art! It's so pretty! Better than mine. -jealous- ^^
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