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Reviewed By: IsisTheEgyptianGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2004 15:55 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Isis: *sitting on the couch* Hi there Yume!! Again a lovely chapter! *sigh* I'm all by myself today, Kagome and everyone decided to take a road-trip to Disney World. Sesshoumaru didn't want to go though. Something about the demented robot children of the "It's a Small World After All" ride. But since I haven't seen him all day I'm assuming he went. Silly Seshou, he doesn't need Tetsusaiga at all! He's strong enough without it. Not to mention really smart and cool. Guess that's why he's our favorite Taiyoukai. ^__^ Seshou: *sneaks up behind her and grabs her just to scare her* Isis: AHH!! Sesshou!! *clutching her heart* What the freak was that?!! I thought you went to Disney. Sesshou: *shrug* If I did that, not only would this Sesshoumaru have destroyed the "It's a Small Wrold After All" ride and got you sued, I wouldn't have access to a computer to check up on Yume and SF's fics. Isis: *frowns* Not good, I'm starting to rub off on you. I can't live without my computer. *shrug* Oh well, update soon Yume!!
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Title: Awaikage
Reviewed By: Za Reiken On: January 05, 2004 23:42 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very very cool I loved it sorry I don't cry over stories Yume. Anyway once again great update soon. Awaikage Za Reiken P.S. I'm sure you can pass Math Analysis with an "A!" Yume and CF heres some "special' chocolate for you.
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Reviewed By: Striking Falcon(not logged in) On: January 05, 2004 22:49 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Silver Fox: {::grabs CF by the tail and hoists her in front of Yume::} Now why are you too fighting again? CF: CF zapped Yume-chan! {::giggles, then whimpers as Yume tries to grab her::} Silver Fox: Well, at least it's a normal day for you two. It's the full moon tonight, so- CF: CF gets wings! {::tail disappears and CF hits the floor::} Ooooowwwwww! Silver Fox: Sorry about that. But if you think that's bad, look at SF. {::points to a red-headed, bushy-tailed SF sitting at the computer::} SF: Shut up fox. Anyway, great chapter! Sesshou's so sweet in this! Don't worry about a thing! You always have my support, even when I'm stuck like this! {::grumbles::} Why couldn't Dad have been a falcon too? Silver Fox: I love to see her like that. She's so miserable. Anyway, we'll be waiting patiently for 'FMN' and this one so take you're time. CF: You read CF's work too? Silver Fox: {::blushes::} Um....I'm not telling....
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Reviewed By: StormAZ [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2004 15:52 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Filler chapter huh? Well, I think you managed to do quite a few things with that "filler chapter". Sesshoumaru faced his father and TALKED to him, and he also managed to at least start confronting the feelings he was having for Kagome. Good chapter IMHO ^_^
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Reviewed By: White Tiger Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2004 20:59 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great chappy!! ?well sesshoumaru's father find out about kagome, you know, her being a ghost and all?....if he did he would understand why they wouldn't of been able to mate. anyway, im gonna stop babbling about your story since your supposed to be writing, not me. -_-' well, cant wait for the next chappy! UPDATE SOON, k!! Bye!!! =^-^= W.T.P.
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Reviewed By: Amethyst (is not in) On: January 04, 2004 19:11 EST
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Reviewed By: IsisTheEgyptianGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2004 18:34 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Isis: *sigh* Very nice. The thought of Kagome and Sesshoumaru just sitting like that watching the stars is so... peaceful. *sighs again* Sesshoumaru: *looks down at Isis who is sitting on the floor with a dreamy look on her face* I am glad we won't have send over Jaken. Then this Sesshoumaru would have no one to baby-sit Rin. Isis: *sighs again* Sesshoumaru: Update soon Yume. *nudges Isis with his foot* Get up Isis, you need to work on your fics. Isis: *snaps out of her dreamy state* Huh? Oh, killjoy! *sticks her tongue out at him*
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Reviewed By: Fenikkusu Ice (not logged on) On: January 04, 2004 18:25 EST
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Another successful chapter! Good job! Does Kagome feel the same way as Sesshoumaru? Oh by the way wasn't it mentioned that Kagome was like 12 in the first chapter when she was a ghost? In this chapter it was mentioned that Kagome will forever be 18. Did Kagome as a ghost age physically? Oh and FYI, I've updated my fic, "Rose Bloomed from Fire" if you wanna continue reading it. Anyway see ya!
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: amyfushigiyugi [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2004 18:20 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow just wow i love your story
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Reviewed By: iram(wakcoramaco87) On: January 04, 2004 17:45 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this chapter was awesome! i like the way you had the "visual" words! yeah i heard that the 1st inu movie would be coming too! along with 75 new inu episodes!!!! woop woop!!! but i also heard that they're a petition going around to ban anime *____* oh well... hopfully it's bs! hehe! i can't hope you update this story soon! lol! it's so different but really good! p.s. sorry if i asked before but will this have a happy s/k ending? or do i have to wait until the end of the story to find out???? *sobbs* until the next time... ja!
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: japanese_angel12 On: January 04, 2004 01:19 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg..i really luv this fic...its so good.!!!! original, detailed, list goes on and on. the story is real eerie...but that's wut makes it good. well plz update real soon. i luv this fic a lot!!!
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Reviewed By: C On: December 24, 2003 20:03 EST
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COOL! I REALLY REALLY REALLY LIKE IT! does kagome live again? plz let her live again! sesshoumaru needs her! ok... -takes a deep breath- i'm good, update will u? plz? thank u! bye!
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Reviewed By: Cresent Moon 22000 On: December 22, 2003 19:31 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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HAAAA ME LIKE ME LIKE. Ha does kagome turn human again or Demon or get's a longer life or something, or deos she ge to heaven and then be reborn again with the same name and her and sesshomaru meet????? anyhoo PLz update soooon OOOOKKKKKK
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Title: Za Reiken
Reviewed By: Awaikage On: December 22, 2003 02:10 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cool you updated Yume now please updat ForgetMeNot its like your best story so far. Awaikage Za Reiken P.S. CF about that curse should take effect about now so I would suggest you not eat choclate. I think I might have gone clinicly insane Yume sorry.;)
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Reviewed By: Striking Falcon(not signed in) [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2003 20:31 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
SF: Oh, how sad. Inu-chan: {::watching SF out the corner of his eye::} Is she going to start crying again? Silver Fox: I smell the tears, but I think she's straight. SF: IF you two are finished...Thank you. Anyway, great chapter. I see that the writer's block is subsiding. I'm-{::grabs Silver into a headlock::} WE are still avabliable if you need us. Silver Fox: Yeah. Just holler. Um SF? SF:Yeah? Silver Fox: {::gasping::} I can't fricking BREATHE!!!!! SF: Oh sorry about that. {::lets go::} Silver: {::sucking up air::} Oh, and check out SF's bio page. She was actually stupid enough to let Naraku read the kids a story. Inu-chan: And you almost got melted! Sango: And she lit Kikyou up like a Christmas tree! {::laughs along with the rest of the cast::} Inu-chan: {::scowling::} Hey, that's not funny! Shippo: She still smells like burnt cookware! Inu-chan: I'm going to make you pay for that! {::chases Shippou around the room::} SF: For the love of...{::sigh::} Well, it was great talking to you. Silver Fox: Before everyone lost their minds. SF: Yeah, that. Anyway, Happy Holidays!
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