| "Kagome! Where are you?!" Reviews/Comments [ 409 ] |
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Reviewed By: 12blue12(logged off0 On: February 17, 2004 18:40 PST
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ohh i cant wait till the next chappie some eroticy has been prolonged for too long well coolie chappie a little OOc on sessys part but that is expected and coolie legend i would of never thought somtin like tat would be said coolie on originality well hopin for next chappie soon cya!
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Reviewed By: blackberry [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2004 09:02 PST
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I thought this chapter was interesting, and for the most part the conversation was necessary for certain plot points. (Of course, some stories depend on characters not talking and bumbling their way through relationships.) I liked the statement about marking being a form of control. I know it's a popular cliche in Inuyasha fanfics, but I'm glad you made the point that a relationship built on a magic crutch of that type might not be all that stable. Good work, and I look forward to your next update.
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Title: re note
Reviewed By: D D S On: February 16, 2004 00:51 PST
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read the message i wrote two messages ago REALLY IMPORTANT!
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Title: good job i hate my comp
Reviewed By: D D S On: February 16, 2004 00:50 PST
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if you are writing it ... giid job !! .... BUT......BUT...... my comp got a virus +-+ - hate it... hate it... hate it... hate it... hate it... hate it... hate it... hate it... hate it... hate it... this sucks i can't even open My Computer
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Title: IMPORTANT
Reviewed By: D D S On: February 16, 2004 00:43 PST
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HI i have senn this story in like 4 differn't web sites and i wanna know if you are the real writer every website says its amde by a differn't person sorry if u did make it for brining this up but man well.. you get the point
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Reviewed By: dark huntress On: February 15, 2004 23:06 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fanfic. It's really getting good. I love the latest update. Keep going. I hope in the end she picks Sess. I like him more then Inu. Besides I think they will be good for each other and Inu isn't that good with Kag like Sess is. It looks like Sess cares about Kag, more then Inu. Update soon. I must find out what happens next.
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Reviewed By: lazerbeam12345 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2004 22:20 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
keep it up! update!!
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Reviewed By: Ridea [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2004 19:22 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
aww, this last chapter so far is sad...but i love the originality you have placed this story thus far....and in Spring Festival....it is sad, yes, but i would like to see it continued...
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Title: I still love this story!
Reviewed By: Melli [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2004 18:16 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Even though I was (a little) mad in my last review, I still love this story. I agree with Duo no Tsuin, Kagome is one Hell of a negotiator. That speech actually (almost) made me cry. *sniff*
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Title: I CAN'T BELIEVE YOU!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Melli [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2004 18:10 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I HATE YOU!!!! We'll no scratch that, I don't hate you but why the cliffhanger? I CAN'T BELIEVE YOU LEFT IT AT SUCH A CLIFFHANGER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I want to know what HAPPENS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! UPDATE!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Inari-foxgoddess(not logged in) On: February 15, 2004 17:29 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
How could you loose readers? this is the best story EVER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: InsaneAuthoress [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2004 14:00 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Very enjoyable ^_~. Wow i wonder how many worlds you can bring them to! It is helpful that they are visiting worlds Kagome has read about, and also as a writer you can make as many as you want! I wonder who Kagome will choose at the end... The storys about Sheshomaru but she seems to REALLY close to Inuyasha. Makes you wonder...
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Title: pickle_01
Reviewed By: shan shan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2004 13:24 PST
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Omg i love it.keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: StormAZ [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2004 11:42 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Ooooh! Loved it!!! And since truths can be many, I think they both made it through that chapter very well ^_^ Although, that ... snippet? from the next chapter has me seeing a lot of very interesting and funny scenarios going on. Can't wait to see how close I am with what you come up with!!
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Reviewed By: 12blue12(logged off) On: February 15, 2004 11:06 PST
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really liked the convo a little on the sappy side at the ending but quite interesting info i mut say well just to say u didnt loose me as a reader if not u intrigued me to read more well hopin for more updates soon cya!
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