| "Kagome! Where are you?!" Reviews/Comments [ 409 ] |
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Reviewed By: White Tiger Princess (not loged in) On: December 16, 2003 23:11 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i think you should just do a quick explanation of the dinosaurs. and update soon k! -^__^- W.T.P.
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Reviewed By: scarn16 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2003 20:51 PST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
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i rate everything else a ten (just a FYI)and as for the inqiry of the detail of the reason as to how she knows about dinos, that is completely up to you because you are the writer. i might be a little off on this but Sesshomaru doesn't believe that Kagome is from another time. if i am correct that that could be a good oportunity for Kagome to prove to Sesshomaru the truth of her words. casue i believe Sesshomaru 'reserved judgment' of her tale of the future. and if im completely off base disregard what i wrote, but do what ever you feel is right for the story regardless.
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Reviewed By: trihn On: December 14, 2003 21:42 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay! i like it! keep updating.
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Reviewed By: Lady Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2003 14:30 PST
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Hey! It's a good fic. Can't wait to read the rest. I have an idea. Why not visit the Meji Era? That would be fun. Sesshomaru versus Kenshin. I see you're building up the 'not killing' idea. That screams 'GO TO THE MEJI ERA AND FIGHT KENSHIN!' If you ask me. Anyway, please add more chapters. I'm looking forward to some more.
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Title: Kagome! where are you?
Reviewed By: chibimethos On: December 10, 2003 09:09 PST
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hahahaha. I love it!! Where's the rest of it?
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Reviewed By: White Tiger Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2003 16:30 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hi! great chappy! i can't wait for the next chappy. i can picture kagome's face perfectly when she saw the tyrannosaurus rex and to add to that what sesshy told her. i pictured that and i started laughing> ^.~ well, update soon, k! -^__^- W.T.P.
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Title: :)
Reviewed By: Pkat On: December 05, 2003 05:06 PST
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I really like this story so far!!! I'll try reading your other one, I never really gave it a chance before... but I really like your writing style so I'll give it a shot.
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Reviewed By: RED DAY On: December 05, 2003 02:15 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I would stick to T REX and add creatures from T Rex's time. I swear Sess is so funny ..HEHEHE! If you get Kag to have sex with him I think you better introduce alcohol into your fic, because she is going to have to be drunk to put up with his ways!!
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Reviewed By: sundragon(not signed on) On: December 05, 2003 01:55 PST
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Very Ironic twist! I like! Adios!
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Reviewed By: White Fox 612 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2003 21:12 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great fic!!! I fell out of my chair laughing at poor fluffy!!! PLZ update real soon!!!
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Reviewed By: RED HAT On: December 02, 2003 12:11 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok, I really did laugh at Sesshoumaru referring to himself...HAHAHAHAHAHA!!! Matter-or-fact im still laughing BWAHAHAHAHAHAHA! Now about the romance part, come on now you've got to give a little more detail then them making sounds @___~' I mean this is Sess the love machine..hehehehe!! OK, enough of the laughing(hehehe) just update im having fun with this story, PLEASE update soon!!
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Reviewed By: Lease [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2003 22:35 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story, please keep updating.
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Reviewed By: the four cousins [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2003 14:42 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*giggles*
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Reviewed By: kynni [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2003 21:17 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
=D Great job! Read it, liked it, and added it to 'fave list'~ I really hope to see you update soon.
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Reviewed By: Miara (who will log in someday) On: November 27, 2003 11:42 PST
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*gasp* They're not gonna have sex RIGHT NOW and discover that they really luuuurve each other even though they're enemies? Doesn't that violate the rules of Inuyasha fanfic? Well, that and the fact that it's well written, and has a plot. Keep going!
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