| "Strength of Bond" Reviews/Comments [ 280 ] |
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Reviewed By: Knock-on-Wood [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2005 00:38 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awsome chapter! Wow...this chapter was very jam-packed with action and you even had time to throw in a moment of romance! :D Thank you! ^_^ I loved it so much! Anyway, please update again soon when you get the chance! Until then, take care! :D
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Reviewed By: SesshomarusNekoHanyou (not logged in) On: September 11, 2005 10:21 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This chapter was wonderful! Great job describing the battle and everything, I really enjoyed it. Is there any other way those two will be connected? How strong can a bond be? ^_^ And don't worry about the japanese, I feel it gives it a little more something to the story, plus I like different languages in stories...I dunno I'm weird. Keep up the good work and update sooooooon!!! please!!
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Reviewed By: InuYoukai24 (Not Signed In) On: September 11, 2005 01:43 EDT
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Yet another great chapter! Keep up the great work! Since Kags felt Inu's pain, does that mean that the bond is stronger now? Why was InuYasha so worried when she mentioned that?
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Title: ahhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: flrsblue [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2005 19:33 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it's been a while and still know update!! your killing me here. i really love your story i do hope you finish this story dont give up its an awsome fic. anyway post something soon please.
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Reviewed By: Knock-on-Wood [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2005 16:05 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow...that last chapter was excellent! I found it all very emotional, especially the part with Shippo's family. I must say, your absence has not affected your writing at all! I continue to enjoy your writing and your fabulous use of description as you continue this wonderful plot! Great job! Just update again when you can, okay? I'll be waiting! :D
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Reviewed By: a_cute_bunny [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2005 20:39 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story. it is excellent. however, my only complaint with this last chapter is that when talking about having children of their own, it is progeny, not pridigy. it just came across as funny, totally not the mood you were going for. however, i think this is an excellent fic and i love the command of the japanese language due to the dictionary at the end. Keep it up! Sara
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Reviewed By: inuyoukai24 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2005 03:17 EDT
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wow, i mean wow! i just sat and read all 22 chapters (took me 3 hours, its 3 am!) LOL and i LOVE IT!!! you write so well, its an honor to read this! cant wait for the next update!
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Reviewed By: Rhayne On: August 24, 2005 02:25 EDT
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Initially, I loved this story. You write excellent erotica, have done a great job developing I&K's relationship, and have an interesting "bonding" concept. However, I'm almost at the point of no longer reading it due to the random Japanese words thrown in. Some words are necessary and others can add flavor, but often they are distracting or confusing. In my opinion: -Honorifics (-san, -kun) are fine. They add flavor and are likely known to most readers, easily determined by contexted, or ignored. -Anime specific terms (Youkai, miko) are generally ok. These terms should be known by the readers and often don't have good English counterparts. -Japanese words that don't have a simple English equivalents are no problem. For instance, hakame and gi are describing specific types of clothing and would be described as such in an English as well. -Relational names/terms of endearment can be problematic, but usuable (0kaasan, koi, baka). I feel they are okay if used in a stand alone sense ("I love you, koi.", "OKaasan", he yelled.) but should not be used inside an actually sentence ("My Chichiue can beat up your Chichiue"). In general, don't just throw the Japanese translation of the word into the sentence (Konoama, Keitai). Thank you for at least including translations. Having them at the beginning would help, but using fewer terms would be appreciated. Once again, I love the story, it's just been difficult to read and appreicate it with all the Japanese terms.
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Reviewed By: lemon_lover [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2005 17:32 EDT
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well i really like your story... its rare to find people that make rin sesshys daughter not lover... hope your job thing goes well and that you update rather quickly a fan, dee-oh-nelly
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Reviewed By: petpeeves123 (to lazy to sign in) On: July 05, 2005 18:23 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think this story is really origional.(sorry for the fact I can't spell) And was a good break from the usual stuff I have read. I enjoyed the story so that is good. It certainly was not boring. I hope you don't work too hard on your job. TTFN!
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Reviewed By: dudekiller On: July 04, 2005 18:35 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great story, please update quickly
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Title: Chapter 21
Reviewed By: ptbear [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2005 18:59 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome. Update again soon. Can't wait to see how they work out the problems and what Naraku tries to do to Kagome and Inuyasha.
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Title: Completely Absorbed....
Reviewed By: InuGrrrl On: June 13, 2005 11:58 EDT
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At first i wasn't sure i liked the sort of slow pace things were going. It was like there was almost too much detail. But as i continued to read my appreciation for your writing grew until i was completely absorbed in it. Your attention to detail is amazing. I love the japanese terms that give this story that flair of authenticity. I love how you gave inu & kag a real beginning, completely detailed & new, yet still adding many parts of their story that we are already familiar with. I admire your writing style, and the way your *lemons* are so emotional/spiritual yet still sexy & mildly perverse (let's be honest here, who doesn't love lemons???). I *impatiently* wait for your next update. As an avid reader in general, Thank you for taking the time to share this with the world.
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Reviewed By: Shie On: June 11, 2005 01:11 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
'That night she held a smiler dream to the last' instead of 'smiler', similar?
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Reviewed By: Shie On: June 11, 2005 01:05 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10
Overall Rating: 4 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting! But, just a note, 'Of course, vampires are not real and they really have no baring on this story.' instead of 'baring' I think you mean 'bearing'.
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