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Reviewed By: InuyashaGirlie (Not logged in) On: May 19, 2005 23:34 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!! I have to tell you that your story is absolutely wonderful and addicting! I don't think I've read anything quite like it, so I give you bonus points for the originality! :) I love how you are able to envolve the lemons/fluff without overdoing it like some other authors do. Everything flows just right and your writing is just beautiful! :) Thank you for writing this, really, truley, I am very touched and in love with this wonderful piece of work! Great job! I know you will be busy so just update when you can, whenever that may be, because I'd wait forever for an update. That's how much I love this story! ^_^ Take care and have a nice day! -Crys
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Reviewed By: SesshomarusNekoHanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2005 00:49 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a great story! Definitely one to make you laugh as you read it and yet feel the seriousness of the moments as well. Good job and keep up the good work! Can't wait to see how it all ends!
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17(nsi) On: May 15, 2005 21:44 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
thanks for the chapter =D
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Reviewed By: xfiledino [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2005 21:09 EDT
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Um, I'm confused as to why InuYasha was put on probation? What did he do wrong or was it simply the entire Shikon No Tama thing? I know that Miroku and Sango said that he had been relieved of his duties, but no other reasons were told. Just wondering...
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Title: Gamu yo
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2005 21:48 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
battles, and fluffy little tails...I love this chapter, and I'm looking forward to some more. I wonder if the next one will be a tear puller
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Reviewed By: Artemis Moon On: May 12, 2005 23:23 EDT
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It certainly has been a while since I last read this story, so it took a bit of work to catch up. But I'm glad I did! Very enjoyable and I love how the story is progressing so far. Keep it up and update whenever you find the chance, ok? ^_^
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Reviewed By: Tarzan from fanfic.net On: May 12, 2005 21:05 EDT
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wow wow wow great story. just found it, which makes me sad you won't update for a while, but worth the wait.
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Reviewed By: PrncessS (not logged in) On: May 12, 2005 13:28 EDT
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Since you want to be so correct in translations, I have a couple corrections for you. Sankon Tetsusou- (Sahn-con the-sue-soh) tetsuo is a hard "tet" sound, not a soft "th" sound. And urasai is actually spelled urusai, the "u" sound is more like a "oo" sound like in "you," but without the "y" Anyway, I really like this fic but it feels like it has slowed down a lot since the beginning and like the plot is being forgotten in details. I hope you get a chance to work on it this summer, then you can post a ton of chapters all at once! =)
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Reviewed By: pooky mon On: April 27, 2005 22:19 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think that the story is really great. It's sort of like i'm watching the show right as i read this. You are very descriptive and catch themood of the story well.GOOD LUCK with the rest of the story can't wait till your next update.
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Reviewed By: yuyu-inuyashaluva [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2005 16:03 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story. Lately, you have been updating sooner than usual, and I really love that. Please update soon...please?
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Reviewed By: reader1 On: April 20, 2005 19:39 EDT
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update! update! update! i love your story and really want to read more!
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Title: UPDATE! I have no life so I depend on fanfiction... I know...so sad
Reviewed By: lil ol' Ina On: April 18, 2005 19:53 EDT
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Ya know Im a camper but in no way am I a happy one. I have yet to read a single new chapter and I am dieing to read the new installment in this fine ass story... so get to the writing and help me out here. I realy am getting a little tired of having to BEG u to update. I mean my hands cramping up here from typing. lol. Really though I really congratulate u on a job well done. I mean I pride myself for being a pretty good writer but my best work would be put to shame next to urs. So umm... UPDATES? Anytime.. ANYTIME SOON? I hope its soon. Well... see ya later pookie. Adios!
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Title: OH NO!!!!!
Reviewed By: U Rock! On: April 11, 2005 16:15 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!!!!!!!!! HOW COULD U JUST DROP US LIKE THAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I DONT KNOW IF U NOTICED BUT UR KILLING ME HERE!!!!! THIS IS INJUSTICE! WHERES THE HUMANITY?!?!?!?!?!? I FEEL SO ALONE.... lol just update already.
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17(nsi) On: April 09, 2005 18:17 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
=D
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Reviewed By: CeruleanStar [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2005 23:52 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey~ I really love your stroy. It's original and sweet and you do a great job with characterization without making it boring. Your story is one of my absolute favoites. I do have a request regarding the definitions though. I really like how you give the definitions so that we know what we're reading. However, I was wondering if it would be possible for you to just put he definition in parenthesis right after you use the Japnase word. That way we would have the definition and still knwo where the word appeared because I know that I perosnally don't usually remember where the word showed up in the first place, so I have a hard time remebering why the word was important. Please update again soon! I really want to see what happens to our pavorite couple. By the way, was the voice Kagome vaguely remembered Kikyo? Keep up the good work and please don't make us wait too long. ~CS
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