Title: Ok
Reviewed By: kagome19 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2003 22:30 CST
Comment/Review:
Your story was ok, but I don't read yaoi I'm so sorry I skipped past it so I could read as much of it as possible and what I did read was ok. You had a few grammar errors ( lol but who am I to talk) but the story idea was great
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