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Reviewed By: Renet On: April 25, 2005 19:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, that was fun. Thank you!
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Title: Wow!
Reviewed By: Nue_Ehr [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2005 13:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Breathes* That was one of the best, if not the best PSoH I've ever read! They were all so in character. I really loved how D was always stuttering.
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Reviewed By: Adalia Glenys On: February 17, 2005 16:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good expression of emotion and characterization, so far as I am familiar with the series. However, with regard to your descriptions of hermaphrodite physiology... Don't try writing on the subject again until you've had a few anatomy courses. I don't have a problem with D as a hermaphrodite, but you *really* don't have the knowledge base to portray the condition accurately.
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Reviewed By: Water Sprite [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2004 17:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
All I have to say is... MORE!! NOW!! Oh, and great job on the entire thing, the characters were really on the mark >^-^
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Reviewed By: haiiroko On: September 27, 2004 23:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh for the love of god PLEASE write more!!! =D I loved this story and sent it to my friend. Somehow even though it was a PWP you managed to make it seem...like it had more substance. You really captured the characters well, and made sure that their personalities reflected on their actions. It was great!!!! =D
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Reviewed By: no need to know On: August 10, 2004 03:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
All I can say is...Oh. My. GOD. MORE FOR THE LOVE OF GOD!
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Reviewed By: @_@ On: July 27, 2004 08:05 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
That was totally hot! I loved the hot sex and the underlying tones of the whole story!
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Reviewed By: The Platypus Elf On: June 19, 2004 23:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
All right, I've always been rather disgruntled about LeonxD slash because I've always imagined the count as this androgynous Lord of All Pimpitude (if you'll forgive my silliness) that is above and beyond sex but... that was just great. Your characterization of Leon was just a riot and in my opinion, perfectly in line with Akino Matsuri's character. Although I prefer to see D as more in control, that is but a personal preference and does not change the fact that this was nothing short of excellent. Your actual writing style of the sex is a good balance of Leon's crudeness and erotica. Thanks for a good read and inspiring lot of stupid grinning and giggling on my part. And thank you for sparing us from the blasphemy that would be pregnant D.
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Reviewed By: Kuroiko On: June 08, 2004 20:02 CDT
Comment/Review:
Interesting fic. However, I would like you to know that the term "ai ren" actually means "beloved" or "sweetheart". It is composed of the two words "ai" meaning love and "ren" meaning person. The Japanese equivailant is something like "koi" or "koibito". Thank you for your time.
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Reviewed By: IK'kukuharen On: May 13, 2004 19:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was an amazingly beautiful fic..petshop of horrors is one of my all time favorites so I really enjoyed reading this beautiful work of explicit art ^_^
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Reviewed By: Iceprincess813 On: April 01, 2004 09:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved every minute of it. You are wonderful. If it is going to happen, This is how it would happen. You rock. You have inspired my own twisted mind to function in weird ways. Keep up the good work.
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Title: wicked
Reviewed By: the concubine Alia On: March 14, 2004 08:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
way wicked just wow i dont think i have read a fic in this fandom that impressed me as much as this one did, quite possibly a lot of other fandoms as well the reactions, the pure artistry it amazes me please please continue to write more
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Reviewed By: BritMel On: January 25, 2004 14:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
S'not porn, it's art! (hur, hur) Seriously, that was extremely well written, original and hot as hell. Despite the unusual situation, I liked how you kept everyone in character - I couldn't help laughing and shaking my head in exasperation at Leon's reaction when discovering the Count's secret. 'Yay, he's not 100% male, so I'm not 100% gay!' Yes D, he *does* need a lesson in manners - and other things. I look forward to seeing D 'train' him in the follow-up to this (hopefully). Your other PSoH fics are very good too - please keep the exquisite smut coming.
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Reviewed By: Jessie Shockey On: January 23, 2004 00:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this story! I went into it expecting that I would find it kind of funny, to be honest. I didn't expect it to be so HOT. *fans self* And the hermaphrodite thing actually works for this series, since we don't really know what D HAS got down there... I thought your characterization was excellent. ^_^ Leon's Not Decision making was wonderful. And I loved D's reaction to suddenly being seduced with kisses and chocolate. Mmm... Normally, when I read Pet Shop, I'm mostly in it for D, but you made me flat out lust for Leon in this piece. You found a great balance between charming, nervous, and pushyhorny. ^_^ I searched the archive for more of your work, and there was nothing else there! I was so sad. *pouts* Here's hoping that you write much, much more!
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Reviewed By: Takara On: January 18, 2004 17:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hah hah, that's strange--I was just imagining how the Count would use the restroom too. X3 But anyway, this was very beautifully written... The detail and feeling I got from it was wonderful, absolutely wonderful. It was very sexy as well... I didn't even consider it a PWP. Not sure why... I suppose it's because I haven't read one this well written? Heh heh, it was great nonetheless. You captured both the characters and their personalities quite well. There's no doubt in my mind that it could really happen to them. XD Okay, perhaps not. But it's a lovely thought. Leon should have payed more attention to D's male parts too, I think.
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