| "You Will Be Mine" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Title: "You Will Be Mine
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2004 22:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow i like this story..it's very different.i lets you look at the pther side of a female in heat.we always see the male so this is a good change.i can't wait for you to update soon...maria.know are we going to see vegeta in the picture.because you know that he's not bonded to bulma in this story and she's sayian and he's never been with a sayian woman...so please tell!@!!!!!!!!! maria
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Reviewed By: Ciss On: March 25, 2004 08:07 CST
Comment/Review:
. . . just read chap 7
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Reviewed By: J'amieé On: January 12, 2004 14:03 CST
Comment/Review:
aaaah not yet anymore chapters after 6!!! it's a great story!!
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Reviewed By: FallenAngel7901 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2004 01:59 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Terrific story, can't wait to read more!
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