| "Our Love's Forgotten" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: Kaela On: July 07, 2004 17:10 CDT
Comment/Review:
loved it but whats with "the other Sessy"? its bad enough with just Sessy and Hiei being cold-hearted and you just had to add a new character, didn't you? anyway it was good. later.
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Reviewed By: Kaela On: June 07, 2004 16:43 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Comment/Review:
it was kinda short if you ask me. update soon.
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Reviewed By: Kaela On: June 06, 2004 18:11 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love it like always. update soon and hopefully i'll update soon too. ^.^
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Title: hola :)
Reviewed By: rosie13 (too lazy to go on) On: February 27, 2004 15:38 CST
Comment/Review:
hey, its rosie13, author of 'Fateful Dream'! Saw your review and wanted to check out your story. Basically: I LIKE! Its good! But one thing that might get some more attention: On the summary for the story, don't just put the characters we dont know. Include the story line, so you can reel em in! I know everyone thinks that just by doing character descriptions it makes people want to find out what its about, but its actually the opposite. Readers tend to shy away from stories that dont state the plot line straight out. I dunno why, they just do (its wat i do) also, be more confident in yourself! Dont say your story's prett good, its grea! Fantabulous! Magnificent!... but dont day that to your readers. They'll think you're contemptous ^-^;;; Great stuff, keep up the good work! ~rosie13
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Reviewed By: Kaela On: February 12, 2004 16:50 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you forgot to put me in this lil chapter and when r u gonna put me with Hiei? hurry up already and update soon.
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Reviewed By: Lady Kaela [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2004 18:51 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
loved it sam. upate soon.
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Reviewed By: Lady Kaela [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2004 18:51 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
loved it sam. upate soon.
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Reviewed By: Lady Kaela [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2004 16:21 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
you're right, sam, it was a boring chapter but at least we getta kick Kouga's @$$. well update soon. ~Kaela~
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Reviewed By: Lady Kaela [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2004 17:30 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's really good but did you forget about our wings. I mean we are dragons and we could've used our wings to search. That would've been faster. Anyway update soon. ~Kaela~
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