| "Just Breathe" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Title: Just Breathe
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2006 23:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?
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Title: Just Breathe
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2005 16:30 CST
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Title: Just Breathe
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer On: November 13, 2004 19:04 CST
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: ScottishFae [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2004 22:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked this ficlet. It was very creative and you're an awesome writer. I would hope that you would continue on with this and build the plot up some more. You have a lot of talent and I'm looking forward to seeing what else you can bring to this story. Until Next Time... Sfae
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Reviewed By: blazeing bulet [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2004 12:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Continue it! It was grate!
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Title: good......
Reviewed By: kikyo killer [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2004 14:09 CDT
Comment/Review:
good...keep it going! boy it would be funny for her to fined out thats he's her employer! do all head of bussieness companys screw there employes.....?
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Reviewed By: crista_luna_blue_dragon_14 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2004 14:43 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
continue it! it would be funny to see her reaction when she finds out it was her boss. plz!
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Title: *screams*
Reviewed By: Mari [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2004 02:32 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
you are insane to keep your readers hanging even if it's a one-shot! that was some turn on and GAWD! i swear when i was reading this i saw him in my mind... whooo crazy!! that was some sexy stuff, please write another lemon! i'm a fan! hooked!
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Reviewed By: hrc On: May 10, 2004 18:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: sesshy_baby [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2004 16:26 CDT
Comment/Review:
Whoa o.O Love it!!Yay sessho Kag!!^-^ Continue it!Imagine what a shock it would be when she would find out that he was her boss?it'd be like O.O whoa...^-^ Please continue!!
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Title: alicia_nohemi@yahoo.com.mx
Reviewed By: AWSM! On: February 15, 2004 14:43 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!! that's all i can think of! but i wish u could develop this further!! PLEASE!!! it's such a good start!! hey!! have u seen a move call a 100 girls??!! ur fic remind me of it!! course it was really different just the fact that both were in a elevator! mmm.. we... can i ask u for this favor u know keep going !!!! i know it will be great!! please i HAVE to ask u!! please if not can I???!! but i think it will be better if u do!! please e-mail me what u think!! SOON !!!! PLEASE!! TC! .ag.
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Reviewed By: Dragon's Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2004 12:47 CST
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Odd, but she never heard his name. Does she know that he's Sesshomaru, owner/manager/whatever? Ha ha, one shot lemons are so wonderful. I'm addicted.
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