| "AN UNUSUAL LEMON - A boy who loves his work" Reviews/Comments [ 59 ] |
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Title: I'm back to say...
Reviewed By: Death-By-Minnow [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2008 15:06 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Write more. Lots more. It's been oh so long.
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Title: WAIT, i just remembered....what happened to kaworu?
Reviewed By: zamba136 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2007 21:23 CST
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i would have liked him to take part in this story, as well as the twins...oh well. again, good story
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Title: wow...i've been searching
Reviewed By: zamba136 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2007 21:19 CST
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well, i must say one thing. in no means do you ever have the right to feel ashamed of this...i love that you have opened my eyes to this new way of seeing angels. even though kaworu is my favorite character, i never thought of the others having a human form. i liked the incest...it bothers me how it is so looked down on, as well as multiple lovers theory.
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Title: Well Done
Reviewed By: SierraM [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2006 09:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fanfic is one of the best works I've read. The sexual situations complement a very good story. The relationships are well developed and the premise is original. I am most impressed by the way you developed Mana's and Asuka's character. Their relationship seems perfect in this alternate reality. I'd ignore the guy that flamed you. He's obviously just a mindless troll who has no basis for his criticism.
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Title: Sucks
Reviewed By: Darknee On: September 29, 2006 16:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are a total shithead and this story, not surprisingly, smells of crap as it comes from you...
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Reviewed By: Shinden [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2006 04:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's definitely diferrent from any other Eva fic I've read. and, yes, it's more than just a hentai story. A+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
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Reviewed By: ralben On: March 26, 2006 06:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
well, after reading all of this in about 9 hrs straight, from 8pm to 5am, i'd have to say that this fanfic simply put was awesome. and now, if you'll excuse me.. i think im gonna go to sleep before i keel over
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Reviewed By: The Admiral Alchemist On: August 08, 2005 02:33 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dude You Kick Ass thats all i gotta say if u read this u have inspired me in a way most writers never do. i've only read maybe 8 fics that are this good, you've made me laugh, made me cry, made me mess up my pants, honkey. jk love ur work man keep it up
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Title: Sick... in the best of ways
Reviewed By: Death-By-Minnow [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2005 16:27 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I never thought I'd ever find something with this many horrible perversions that I'd actualy enjoy. Way to JUST BARELY skid around the actual incest mark, hat with the whle "reconstructed with slightly altered DNA" thing. Under normal circumstances I'd be apalled by the complete disregard for most modern moral standards, but This has made me rethink the possibilities of there being other ways to do things. This in no way means I condone incest, just so everyone knows, but the multiple-lover thing was worked out beautifuly. I'm printing out this story so I can reread it all the time. Let's see if I can get lucky enough to get away with reading this during class... It'll be fun alright. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Name: On: January 17, 2005 23:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
You're the same guy who wrote that Evangelion / Record of Lodoss War crossover in which Shinji fucked a horse, right? It figures. This is the second creepiest thing I've ever read, second only to those things from "King of the Seahorses" where Shinji rapes and kills Asuka. Yui is his mother. What's the matter with you? Your fractured English is already painful to read, but it would be forgivable without the incest. The combination of the two makes the Baby Jesus cry. You should be ashamed.
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Reviewed By: SirOverlord [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2004 13:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank You for writing such a wonderful story. It still amazes me that you can portray the characters so flawlessly. this will be n my favorites for a long time to come.
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Reviewed By: Spike of Doom On: November 25, 2004 16:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow i think what you did was very interesting how you kept Shinji "Real" and all the characters you used made this fic interesting to read and very unique.. you know i agree with you that lots of posibilties have been ignored in the NGE world and there could be so many more fics out there.. for now ill settle with this one it was Great
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Reviewed By: allin656 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2004 16:55 CST
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This is an awesome chapter, and the story was excellent. This is one of my favorite eva fics that I've ever read. I loved how you changed the angels into the good people in this story, it was really enjoyable. I hope that you continue to write and I can't wait for your next story.
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Title: Samurai of Shadow
Reviewed By: Too Tired to write regular name On: October 28, 2004 20:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a very good story. I've read your other ones too but i have to say this is your best one. My favorite part about this story was the final paragraph. ^_^
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Reviewed By: allin656 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2004 18:39 CDT
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Wow, this was another really great chapter. I really love reading this story, and I can't believe how good it is. I was wondering if this was the last chapter or not. I really love it so I hope that you will be able to keep writing.
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Reviewed By: allin656 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2004 17:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love this story, this chapter was really cool. I loved the punishment for Gendo. Keep writing because this story is one of my favorites and I love it. I hope that you're able to udpate soon.
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Title: Wow!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: SirOverlord [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2004 21:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Holy crap! This is an awesome fanfic. Someone can search the the internet for years and not see anything half this good. Please, I beg of you please continue this. *wipes away a tear*
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Reviewed By: Just a guy On: September 10, 2004 02:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok story. I have to say I haven't seen this kind of plot before. And it was good you included Mana, altrough in strange role. Any hope for Shinji/Mana lemon someday?
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Reviewed By: allin656 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2004 22:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love this story, and I'm glad that you were able to update it. I hope to see the next chapter soon please keep writing.
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Reviewed By: Priest [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2004 16:13 CDT
Comment/Review:
another great chapter, i look forward to the next. keep up the good work. Ja-ne =(^_^)=
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Title: Lord of Night
Reviewed By: Shoushi On: September 06, 2004 18:17 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn! This is an amazing story, and i really hope you're not finished with it yet. Please make the next chapter soon.
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Reviewed By: allin656 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2004 02:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story, I hope that you will update it again sometime. This is my fav evangelion story I have ever read. i really hope that you will update soon.
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Reviewed By: Carsomyr [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2004 19:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A wonderful, taboo breaking, and often hilarious fan fiction. A must read for any fan if for nothing else then the asuka/mana pairing, bravo to you on that one. I hope you intend to write many more chapters on this series, it is in my opinion your best to date (even though your other NGE fic is nearly as good).
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Title: hmr
Reviewed By: hmr On: July 21, 2004 11:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
BRAVO! As expected , great writing! Your lemon scenes as well as the story is unmatched! keep writing and update soon!
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Reviewed By: portercu [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2004 12:17 CDT
Comment/Review:
if you like this story check out this guys website, hes got chap 8 up. Vader bud, you have got to be the biggest sadist i have ever heard of, i bow before your greatness. keep up the good work, ill see you at the update.
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Title: Hahaha
Reviewed By: Unknown Flamer On: July 17, 2004 11:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to admit, af first I wasn't sure about this fic. But now, I actually like it. And it's not just for the sex scenes either. I would like to see more humorous scenes in this fic like the battle with Zureal, Shinji and Tri sleeping together in the same bed with Misato watching, etc. All in all, it's a good fic and I would like to see more of it. You have an occational dropped letter in a couple of words...or should be for, etc. But over all, this fic is easy to read.
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Reviewed By: portercu [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2004 14:57 CDT
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this guy has alot more of this story on his website, you should check it out. by the way Vader man you have to be the most sadistic gendo basher i have ever had the privelege of knowing. i bow before your greatness. keep it up ill see you at the next update.
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Title: Good
Reviewed By: ChAoTiC-LoRd On: July 16, 2004 00:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG, WRITE MORE PLEASE. I CAN'T BELIEVE IT TOOK YOU THIS LONG TO WRITE 1 CHAPTER!
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Reviewed By: Al_Rowen On: July 14, 2004 05:02 CDT
Comment/Review:
Just read ch5. I had a great laugh imagining eva2 getting a spanking. Still got tears in the eyes while typing this. The boxing match was fun to. Looking forward to reading your next chapter.
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Title: Still twitching
Reviewed By: j0 On: July 12, 2004 14:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
write...more...please, I beg of you!
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