| "Sun-Kissed Copulation" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: Ranuel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2012 12:55 EDT
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The slightly dreamy sensuous descriptions make this even hotter and make perfect sense given the ending. |
Reviewed By: zyf [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2007 14:22 EST
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That had to be the best threesome I've read since "The Seduction of Urameshi Yusuke." Hats off to you! It was beyond words to compliment. I loved the original view of Hiei. It was very refreshing. As was the unique story that lead up to it. I didn't get tired of the plot and scroll down to the smut. Never stop writing please.
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Title: Sun-Kissed Copulation
Reviewed By: shadow_of_the_shades [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2005 14:19 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
DAMN!! I wasn't sure whether or not if I'd ever get done with that one before my parents got back home! My dad actually found this minimized at the bottom of the screen this morning. So you can guessed what he and my mom talked to me about this morning. lol. ^-^ I really enjoyed it though. That was the first YYH threesome story that I've read and I'm semi-glad that it was Yaoi. I am so happy that I have soemthing to tell one of my friends. I thought it was really cool how you made Hiei in the story, and I might even have to think of having similar traits in the fanfic my two friends and I are writing with him with one of them. ARIGATO!! ^-^ lol. g2g Tchao!
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Reviewed By: Mandie On: November 03, 2004 22:04 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow...That was one he[][] of a fic!! Hope you write more!
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Title: >*< deadly good
Reviewed By: LuciferReborn [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2004 12:30 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was awsome! im a shamless fan of yeoi and you made mt day
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Reviewed By: Kitsune No Baka [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2004 11:43 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i swear, this is the best lemon i've EVER read
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Reviewed By: Anubis_Himura [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2004 16:33 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was wicked good! I loved your description, and it was all a dream haha yay! I loved it, oh and I loved the line "Evidently, Hiei had slightly cannibalistic tendencies... " that just made me giggle ^_^ Great fic!!
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Reviewed By: MeLaiya On: January 29, 2004 05:44 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow...oh man...wow. I think ill go change my underwear now. *heads to the bathroom with a new pair of draws*
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