| "Akane the Dominatrix" Reviews/Comments [ 26 ] |
Reviewed By: shadowalker666 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2009 06:13 CDT
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Intriguing and unusual story please update soon and finish it also, but not to soon for that. Would like it to go for a while yet. Guess i'm a bit perverted as well :).
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Reviewed By: ca-chan On: August 14, 2009 14:49 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this story, it's fun! I hope you update soon, please please please! it's two years
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Reviewed By: arnoldbold On: June 01, 2008 14:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 3 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Works to kill time, but not much else. A kinda dull story. But then I'm not all that interested in dominatrix anything.
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Reviewed By: aslkfjghruiö On: June 01, 2008 12:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 3 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm quite sure it's 'bokken' not 'brokken', and I am one hundred percent sure that it is 'sore' not 'swore'. Aside from your habit of adding unnecessary letters and a few easy to make grammar mistakes it was great quality. The rating is for the first four chapters.
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Reviewed By: Destenyne [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2008 20:13 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay so I just read up to chaptet six but I'm still going. Umm...It's goo...really good...but WHAT THE HELL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Don't get me wrong it's good but...odd. And what's up with shampoo and mousse? Good but...ah!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: tomdj1701 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2007 18:24 CST
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Good story so far. Look forward to the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: AMWOOD co [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2007 12:13 CST
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A very different take on the usual Ranma S&M plots. Rich. Looks like Shampoo had a reason to call Akane 'Pervert Girl' all the time (insert amused chuckle). My only thoughts are what are you going to do when the rest of the Ranma cast besides the Amazons and the two vic... ummm... the couple (yeah, that sounds good) find out what's going on. From the offices of AMWOOD co
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Reviewed By: Okami_Kitakazeno [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2007 09:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm definately glad to see that updates are still forthcoming with this story. And I can vouch for you on Nabiki's personality, she is definately evil in the manga, and that's how she should be!
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Reviewed By: triviatrap1982 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2007 21:38 CST
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Well now this is certainly an original story that I've read so far. It's also a nice use of a spell that I'd not thought to use at all. I'll enjoy reading the rest of this story now.
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Reviewed By: Mel_One_Half [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2006 21:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great! Please continue? It's pretty interesting ^-^
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Reviewed By: goku_90504 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2006 02:06 CDT
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you know the eyedrops are a really neat idea though i have trouble buying the idea of ranma as a submissive type though and akanes normally rough actions just seem to me to be a cry to be punished but still neat story anyways
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Title: Marco...Polo!
Reviewed By: Arthurslove On: May 19, 2005 12:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
When are you going to update? You're killing me here! You've built a pretty "nice" storyline, and I'd hate to think that you abandoned it.
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Reviewed By: elementalmoon [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2005 23:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love the premise behind this fic! it was really origianl, and i can't wait till you update!
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Reviewed By: sparkyaf On: November 12, 2004 14:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the way this is going. keep up the awesome work. update soon please
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Title: Good... Good...
Reviewed By: Joeskipsey [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2004 17:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yummy!
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Reviewed By: Tetsumi(not logged in) On: October 08, 2004 16:47 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great!Hope you updsate soon!
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Reviewed By: poopthehoop132 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2004 17:15 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a great story keep it up. update soon
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Reviewed By: Tetsumi [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2004 20:39 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice chapter.....update soon!
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Reviewed By: Turtle Dreamer [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2004 09:42 CDT
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*evil laughter* There is just something insanely funny about Ranma being tied up.
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Reviewed By: Tetsumi [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2004 22:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was great please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Sean Malloy On: June 15, 2004 15:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
can't wait for more,please update as soon as possible
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Reviewed By: Ravenna [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2004 04:17 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Alright i'm a hentai and proud of it.^_^ I really hope you update soon.
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Reviewed By: jkeeler On: April 23, 2004 00:05 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I love it. Pleace up date soon!!!
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Reviewed By: hentairoses On: March 01, 2004 02:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is so funny. I feel sorry for Shampoo and the others if akane decide to want to dominate the rest of them.
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Reviewed By: The Dark Blaze On: February 21, 2004 18:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice, if I do say so myself. I like it. Keep 'em coming! (pun intended? That's up to you :P)
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Title: Thief-in-chief
Reviewed By: George Dubya Bush On: February 18, 2004 13:56 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This is cool! Please continue!
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