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Reviewed By: goofy_goober [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2009 15:23 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok overall i thought that it was a good read.. but i thought that the story jumped way too fast i felt like one minute they all just met and the next day the were going out.. so as a recommendation maybe adding a little more detail about what happens instead of just having dialogue.. but the whole plot of the story was great i just needed a little more background and concrete information.. great job though none the less!!
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Reviewed By: im_inuyashas_dirty_little_secret [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2007 15:21 CDT
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it was a wonderful story !!! i loved it!!!!!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2007 21:57 CDT
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amazing story... i really liked it... great work... good job!
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Title: *crying*
Reviewed By: tohruxkyoxyukilover [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2007 17:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG IT WAS THE MOST ENJOYABLE FANFICTION I THINK THAT I HAVE EVER READ!!!!!! omg I CRIED AT THE LAST FEW CHAPTERS! AND I HAVE NEVER CRIED WHILE READING FANFICTION BEFORE!!!!!!!! pLEASE LET ME KNOW RIGHT AWAY IF U WILL BE MAKING A SEQUAL TO THIS STORY PLEASE DO!
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Reviewed By: Candy_luv05 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2007 20:28 CST
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GREAT JOB!!!! LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! UR A GREAT WRITER!!
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Reviewed By: zigyy553 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2007 17:24 CST
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damn...690 reviews. wow
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Reviewed By: hanyouashes [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2006 16:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey!! I love your story!!!! by the way did you used to have a ff.net account. If you do can you send the name to me cause i cant seem to remember it. also have you ever heard of a story called -the source of magic- if so can you tell me where to find it. thanks a bunch Hanyouashes
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Reviewed By: Sakura Samora [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2006 18:45 CDT
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WHAAAT?? IT CANT BE OVER YET *cries* i want moreeeee
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Title: GinaCat
Reviewed By: GinaCat [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2006 14:22 CST
Comment/Review:
Love it
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Title: age
Reviewed By: kaglover1 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2006 21:07 CST
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I was just wondering, did inuyasha have a birthday between chapter1 to chapter 16. He started as 22 but then changed into 23 in the furthur chapters
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Title: Konnichiwa daga docharihe?
Reviewed By: Lady_Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2005 06:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YEAH AWSOME ENDING I LOVED THE STORY, WOOT! GREAT JOB ^___^ Lady Kagome
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Title: Konnichiwa
Reviewed By: Lady_Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2005 06:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YEAH AWSOME CHAPTER WOOT I LOVED IT CAN WAIT TO READ THE NEXT!
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Title: Konnichiwa!
Reviewed By: Lady_Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2005 06:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YEAH AWSOME CHAPTER, I'm suprised that inuyasha didn't hit Myoga for saying that, I would have^_^
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Title: Konnichiwa
Reviewed By: Lady_Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2005 16:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YEAH AWSOME CHAPTER I LOVE HOW SHIPPOU ALLWAYS SEEMS TO IRATATE INUYASHA BUT IN A FATHER SON WAY ^_^
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Title: Konnichiwa
Reviewed By: Lady_Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2005 16:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YEAH GREAT CHAPTER LOVED THE INTENSATY WOOT!
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