| "Long Lost Family" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Reviewed By: Shinimegami21 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2007 08:45 CST
Comment/Review:
UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE!!! I'VE BEEN WAITING FOREVER!! PLEASE UPDATE!!!
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Reviewed By: Stormyronin [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2005 14:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cool! Do Duo and Mokuba actually look anything alike? How old are the others now? Will Seto and the others recognise him straight away? Poor kid! Keep going!!
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Reviewed By: Rievanu On: August 29, 2004 12:46 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please, Please, Please, update this fic its great!
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Reviewed By: GemJewel [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2004 12:51 CDT
Comment/Review:
this was a great chapter!! update real soon plz!
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Reviewed By: Kitsune Chika On: July 10, 2004 17:07 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PPLLLEEEAAASSSSEEEE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ^_^ very good story! i like it! ^_^
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Reviewed By: shinimegami82 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2004 21:42 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hey, it's really good. There's just one problem...grammer...and a little spelling. It's Shinigami not Shinigame.......Shini means Death and Gami means God. Other than some spelling and grammer, it's really good. Can't wait for the update.
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Reviewed By: GemJewel [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2004 21:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Shimigami was spelled wrong and supplies is wrong and usher was abit wrong, disk too. Normaly was incorect. Just thought you should know. plz update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: Camillian On: April 15, 2004 00:04 CDT
Comment/Review:
interesting crossover. but isn't duo supposed to be younger when all this stuff happens to him? also duo's hair color is like chestnut brown or something whereas mokuba's is black. also, if kaiba and co. are like 15-17 yrs. old when mokuba was abducted, how old will they be now? can't wait to see how u plan this fic out! update soon!
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Reviewed By: Shinigami24 On: March 10, 2004 00:46 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pls bring in the pairing 1x2 and bring in Wufei and Co! Cuz I SO want to see Seto being over-protective and Heero's reaction... Of course u realize that Joey'll laugh his ass off when he meets Duo...Cuz they're so much alike...
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Reviewed By: shinimegami82 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2004 22:03 CST
Comment/Review:
Ooh, ooh, write more, please, please. I want to know what happens in the next chapter.
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Title: Interesting
Reviewed By: setoobsessive [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2004 13:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 2 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I noticed a few grammer and spelling mistakes, but besides that it's a great story! You must continue!
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Reviewed By: Kix [MediaMiner Member] On: February 29, 2004 03:14 CST
Comment/Review:
lookin good...i hope you update soon
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Reviewed By: Karmas__Dragon On: February 28, 2004 16:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I know nothing about the shows (yeah i know i am behind) but i enjoied the fic, was very interesting
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