Reviewed By: Sai_Saishi [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2006 16:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, cute story, I really liked it! (Though I think you "forgot" or "left out" a word or two ^^; hence the spelling/grammar 9). To further explain raitings I have given: Over all rating is only a 9 because... well, mostly because I don't like to give 10's on over alls because everything could improve (so it's really nothing against you), and partly because I note in everything that I read that there could be more describing words (though you do have quite a bit of description by the way, so nothing against you). I overall loved the story, short, sweet, and to the point with out seeming too short and pointless. Very nice ^-^ *claps for you and your wonderful story writing ability*
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