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Reviewed By: nessanessa [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2007 17:26 CDT
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AHHHH!!!! i thought you finish it! but i got to 19 and it didnt end!!!! please finish it!!!!
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Reviewed By: ~JuSt-An_OuTcAsT~ [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2006 19:44 CST
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meh...how could you leave me for this long?! i didnt even remember this website was here anymore! if it hadnt been for auto update emails i wouldnt have known anything lol. ITs wonderful that you are trying to finish the story though! Keep it up it was suspenseful dear!!
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Reviewed By: Oozaru Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2005 08:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it! I read the first one, but I didn't bother reviewing once I found out there was a sequel! ^_^" Sorry! Anyway, I love the fic! Can't wait till you get the next chappy out!!! Hurry it up!!!!
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Title: The Great Monkey Saint
Reviewed By: Oozaru Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2005 22:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it! Though I'll admit it gets REAL IRRITATING reading Kakarot and Vegeta's speach. Can you maybe WRITE it like it's normal, but it's really not? Please? It's not a huge problem though. Update SOOOOOOOOOOOOOON!!!!
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Reviewed By: Oozaru Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2005 01:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's very good! I love it so far! But PLEASE update soon! I'm begging you! UPDATE!!!
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Reviewed By: wouldn'tyouliketoknow On: April 02, 2005 15:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Quick Quick!!! Please write some more... wow it's turning into a Soap Opera!
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Title: -wacks-
Reviewed By: ~JuSt-An_OuTcAsT~ [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2004 23:22 CDT
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Me should poke your eyes out with a stick for being so long on update...i almost forgot what was giong on! -growls- Oh well, if you come back with a few more regular updates you will please me, and save yourself from the horrific power of the stick, mwahaha! And yes that was an evil cliffy and I forsake you for it!
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Title: none
Reviewed By: guerro On: June 28, 2004 20:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
really like it please update it as soon as possible i want to know what happens next
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Title: helllllooooo???
Reviewed By: ~JuSt-An_OuTcAsT~ [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2004 10:56 CDT
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Where are you update! -wacks with stick-
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Title: chapter 12
Reviewed By: ~JuSt-An_OuTcAsT~ [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2004 17:53 CDT
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nice chappie...i can see we a building up to something exciting..and maybe some juicy stuff?? hee hee...write more soon i'll email you ;)
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Title: Chapter 11
Reviewed By: ~JuSt-An_OuTcAsT~ [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2004 13:19 CDT
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This chapter was interesting but it was toned down and bit...I know that some really exciting stuff is going to happen soon keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: VegetandAru [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2004 16:02 CDT
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Wow this is so cool. I kinda like it and I normally don't like het so that is a HUGE compliment. Update soon please. I wasn't expecting it to be dr Gero, so thayt's kinda cool like. Gotta go bookmark this page now so yaa... bye bye, keep writing
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Reviewed By: AAAGGGHHH-RUN AWAY On: April 16, 2004 15:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
O.K i'm writing a review so i expect another excellent update!!!! this story is very different from the other highschool fics i've read and i think i read in one story that Dr Briefs name was Teddy and in others Trunks. Just thought that might help:) So plez i want more story!!!!!
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Title: chapter 11
Reviewed By: ~JuSt-An_OuTcAsT~ [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2004 07:47 CDT
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Wow...you know something first i am addicted to your fic...becuase i saw that you updated and went to read it before school..that is kind of sad, you think? This awas a very nice chapter! i am looking up on good jpop music and i had a suggestion so i will get on it after school today...by the way it is still kind of a mystery..what exactly was that article about? I know it certainly revealed all...Great chappie! I hope this review shows up..if you don't see the reviews try the refresh button also..it works for me on your chapters sometimes when i can't see them... ~Jao
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Title: chapper 10
Reviewed By: ~JuSt-An_OuTcAsT~ [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2004 05:33 CDT
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okay..that wasn't really fair...*cries* Just when it was getting good man! *gets sad* Write more this on was really good! oh btw I am going to look up some lyrics right now so i will email you with some nice ones! (i hope) ~Jao
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