| "Takara, The Seductive Demon Assassin" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: sessbabe [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2005 19:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow all i can say is wow it's bin so long since someone has accually paid attention to detail and i love you for it. i only found one or to spelling mistakes but there might be more cuz i suck at spelling and ya. this is something you should countinue you got the first chapter down and you have me hooked so ya update lol ~*~sessbabe~*~ ^_^
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Reviewed By: Korisovra [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2004 03:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think you have a bit of talent in there. The storyline is new, different and thus interesting. For once, the spelling and grammar errors were at a minimum which maximize reader enjoyment all by it's lonesome. I think this is one that should definitely be continued.
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Reviewed By: Korisovra [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2004 03:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think you have a bit of talent in there. The storyline is new, different and thus interesting. For onfce, the spelling and grammar errors were at a minimum which maximize reader enjoyment all by it's lonesome. I think this is one that should definitely be continued.
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