Reviewed By: gwahcola [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2004 12:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW. *waves the JxK banner too* Actually... if you think the battle in Mugenjyou was hinty... well... just watch the Onsen episode 26. WOOOOO, BABY. Juubei and Kazuki taking baths together and Kazu in that little bitty towel thing... and then the Honeymoon "LoveLove" moment... aaaahh. So beautiful. All I could think of was that moment as I read this fic. It was good, since you really stuck to the episodes. I wish you'd written a little more stuff afterwards, not just stuff that happaned in the show, but that's alright! Hmm... what else to say... kyaaa, it was just too cute. I thought your usage of the Japanese was interesting. Ii'n deshou ka... totemo omoshirokute tanoshii da ne... ^^
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