| "37 P.S." Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Title: Good work
Reviewed By: tiberiosity [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2008 19:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I found this story really well written, and rather enjopyable. As there aren't enough Pokegirl world stories out there, I really hope you continue this one. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: ShirahSilvartia [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2007 00:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi about the population thing...if i undstand what you were saying the population would be much higher then it is in the PG timeline...One reason the population wouldnt be so high is the "Widows" spider like pokegirls that gave the Leagues one major bug problem. Also in the Pokedex their on the Leagues most dangerous list because they would decimate entire towns that even had pokegirl defenders (I was tired when i read you passage about the population so i didnt quite understand it) Hope you still write cause your style is probably the Best ive come across on here. -Shirah the ShieldMaiden
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Reviewed By: Soul of the Phoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2007 09:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm kind of hoping Alan gets a pokegirl soon since most of the story is told from his perspective. And it was interesting that you've made a empathic bond form between Misha and the pokegirl so soon. I don't know why you haven't update in so long, but I hope this hasn't been abandoned. It has so much potential. Update soon!
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Reviewed By: Anna May Dreamer [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2007 17:23 CST
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how come you stopped updating your story? it's rather interesting. i like it.
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Reviewed By: Shakeval [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2005 00:48 CST
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cool story, a great begining and plenty of plot building. have you thought that maybe mischa could have some pokegirl heritage? it would be funny if she did. will whoresea be evolving into a SeaDrip or SeaDrag sometime soon?
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Title: Impressive
Reviewed By: forechunkukee [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2005 03:04 CST
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Hmm...I never was a big fan fan of the original Pokemon, nevermind the concept of Pokegirls. BUT! What you have written is just about enough to get me interested into the latter. I must say, superb job on this story so far. The characterization has been excellant so far (Misha taming the Pokegirl instead of one of the guys was an interesting little switcher), grammar/spelling mistakes have been kept down to a bare minimum, and overall, I like this story. Seems like you have just about enough of everything in it, and that works out perfectly. Kudos to you concening the problems within the timelines, that was very impressive (and I get a cookie too!). Can't wait to see the next chapter, I like how it's turning out so far! Peace! d('')b
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Title: You Updated!!!
Reviewed By: Day4Me [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2005 07:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*glomps you, gets shot by your wife* Oops. X_x. *dead from being shot* Yay, you updated! I mentioned that this was one of my favorite pokegirl stories, and that these stories are better than most hentai because THEY'RE ACTUALLY PUNCTUATED CORRECTLY, and you updated! These aren't just characters, either-- they're fully realistic people (even the p-girls). Props for writing better than I ever could. Have a perfect score from a really weird fan (REALLY weird).
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Reviewed By: KeyTobias5 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2005 14:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey B, finally got around to reading some of your older links now that I have you friended on mm.org. It's a good start but do you plan to finish this thign anytime soon? ~Toby
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Reviewed By: ThePD [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2005 20:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice, very nice. I am a fan of any pokegirl stuff and so this "touched me in a place that if Loretta touched me, i would say, oh... thats nice, thats the spot" He he.. i'v been looking for a place to inject some family guy... anywhey, i would really like to learn more about PG.... can someone post the link in a review of my story. Awesom fic, nice style and cool characters.
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Reviewed By: Enigmatic Magus On: August 08, 2004 02:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your style was dandy, nothing that reached out and slapped me, as horrible... and it was generally easy to understand what was goign on and everything. As an ADDED bonus, unlike a large number of other pokegirl fics, you didn't just start adding new characters almost at random, which tends to make following a story difficult. Thanks for that. Spelling and Grammar looked fine... but I don't actively look for that unless specifically asked to, so... yeah. But I'm generally picky, so the fact that I didn't see anything means you had none, or were very close. Originality.. Yeah, it's a relatively unexplored time period as far as I can tell, you're focusing on a group of friends, instead of a tamer and his harem... this is original. This is good. Enjoyability... I did enjoy this. Quite a bit. So why the lower rating? It's too short! Just when things start building up, it's done. But that's okay.. there will be more, eventually.. right? Overall... Yeah. I liked it. And as such, I'm obviously looking forward to reading more.
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Reviewed By: Final_Xero [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2004 00:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
*returns to desk /w a cookie* Mmm, oatmeal. Anyway, you're sooo right about the timeline problems. 20 A.S. my A.S.S. Oh, and a few other things are bothering me. What about Mark and Touji? What direction would they take off in? How cheesed off would they be about their low amunition supply? Y'know, things like that...
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Reviewed By: original shadow On: June 20, 2004 00:07 CDT
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a new place, time and chars a very interesting fic i must say please continue
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Title: Cool
Reviewed By: Chaotic_Laureate On: June 11, 2004 02:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Its better then i though it would be. Well, I'm glad that you finaly wrote something other then that other story about the camp and other stuff.Please hurry and upgrade.
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