| "Never Expected the Unexpected" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Reviewed By: Casy [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2004 23:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol. about that 9....I found that you put but instead of put......so just a small error. But other wise it was great. I loved it. Such drama. I just loved it. You should make more with you and Rowen being marryed and such. Your a great writer. In fact you should write more(Complete) storys. You should be a writer when you grow older. lol. Oh and plz add me to your story!!!! I would love to be in one. I think your a great writer but you should read it over and over to make sure you didn't get any errors.....just like Mr.G says.Can you beleave I listened to him and i'm giveing advice to people from him? Wow....Maybe I should stop thinking about school till tomarrow.....lol! well i guess i could enjoy it a bit........ No thats impossible. lol. ooooooooooo! full moon! lol. Well.....Thanks for being a great friend! Damn there are so many letters i could put in ;.;. I don't think I can write with all of 1500 of them......but maybe i can. Be sure to look at my story! I think if you go to Ronin Warriors the type in the search thing "Love" Then It's called "Love, trust and family". Ok so just read it. It has 4 chapters already. Well I guess i'll see you at oreintation.........................................NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! SCHOOL IS COMING!!!! AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! RUN AWAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! OK I think i'm done all i wanted to do was fini |
Reviewed By: Casy [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2004 20:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OK so i loved it! i realy did! keep up the good work! -Casy
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