| "Kagome's Return (sequel to Kagome! Where are you!?" Reviews/Comments [ 215 ] |
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Reviewed By: rommel17 not signed in On: July 11, 2004 18:59 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well it might be some people think your jumping the gun a little, thhough not to the extremes I see some authors do. Next chapter expand a little, in such that maybe punishment is enacted upon Kanna. Perhaps Miroku oversees the punishment... Ah, also finish A Shard In Kyoto to tie things in. Thats all I can say. Semper Fidelis
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Reviewed By: Kyouri [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2004 18:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic is amazing. I keep hoping you'll turn out more chapters faster, but we guess we have to be happy with what we get. You aren't doing a thing wrong, Jeff. ^_^ You can't let the number of reviews discourage you. Think of how the rest of us would feel if you abandoned us. *hopes her tears are working* I can't wait for the next chapter, especially the SessKagInu triangle. Great job, Jeff!
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Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2004 18:45 CDT
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Great chapter. I can see a conclusion coming between the triangle. But what is to happen? If Kagome gets the souls of her family back, then Inu Yasha will die and go to hell with Kikyo. And if she doesn't she will lose her families souls forever. I don't see anything wrong in the story. I think the decline of the reviews can be due to anything. But it is a good story. Keep up the excellente work, Jeff.
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Reviewed By: faerie demoness [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2004 16:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
FontColor You are evil. How could you kill all those people and melt down Fluffy's sword! I have to admit that even though you're evil, you're damned brillant.
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Reviewed By: Rommel17 not signed in On: July 10, 2004 10:21 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmm... Going strong.
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Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2004 21:52 CDT
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*jaw hits the floor and is speechless* You just killed off three people very dear to Kagome and Tensegia will most likely not exist to bring them back... I wonder if your fans will turn rabid on you? The acorn will that make her into a Goddess like her father the Goshinboku wanted? Will her powers enable her to bring the dead back to life? Or will they remain dead? Naraku is sooo dead, isn't he? Great chapter. Violent, gory, horroresk, but it was still great. Keep up the excellente work Jeff, I can't wait to see what you got planned next... *Still can't beleive you killed them off*
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Title: SesshoumaruLover#?
Reviewed By: melody [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2004 20:06 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*winks* Great, as expected! This has gotten reeeeeeally interesting...I can't wait to find out what happens!!! Please write quickly and update soon, as promised. And keep up the good work!! Thanx!!!
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Reviewed By: StormAZ [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2004 00:10 CDT
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Well, you know I enjoy the story! And so far, you've had more than enough twists and turns to keep me watching for updates ^_~ And I do want to thank you for being so diligent about updating! This ... continuation has been every bit as good as the original story (although I'm still wondering if any more worlds are going to be added to it ^_^)
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Reviewed By: snowcat/aff On: July 07, 2004 23:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Finally got to catch up! Yeah for plot sensei -jeffs-sama. Lots of twists and surprizes! Would still liked to have had Sasano-O part of the scheme and some testostrone fly resulting from a heated arguement between him and Sesshomaru. Sorry for the delay, error pages on aff, glad there was this 2nd option.
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Title: don't stop now!
Reviewed By: lazerbeam12345 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2004 21:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hope that you aren't thinking of ending my favorite fic of all time anytime soon :)! I really want to see how things develop now that they are home!
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Reviewed By: rommel17 not signed in On: July 07, 2004 12:10 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was unexpected. Well I look forward to the next. However it is unsafe to holster a weapon in the back of yourself. Guns belong in proper holsters when not being used or cleaned, for a good reason of safety. Semper Fidelis
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Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2004 23:19 CDT
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Damn. Never expected that. Wow this is really good. Never thought you could top Kagome, Where are you? but this is wow. Great story Jeff. keep up the excellente work. Really man you deserve it. Can't wait til the next chapter.
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Title: die!!!
Reviewed By: GONLOVER123 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2004 18:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
U better hurry up and finish the story or i'll hunt u down and make sesshomaru kill u slowly!!!!!
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Title: die!!!
Reviewed By: sesshomaru loves me On: July 05, 2004 18:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
U better hurry up and finish the story or i'll hunt u down and make sesshomaru kill u slowly!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Kitsune_Bi [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2004 12:32 CDT
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OMG I wanna see what Kagome's God form is!!!!! LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!! ^_____________________^
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