| "Kagome's Return (sequel to Kagome! Where are you!?" Reviews/Comments [ 215 ] |
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Title: Keep it up!
Reviewed By: lazerbeam123456 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2004 15:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story. I can't wait to see what happens next!
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Reviewed By: Ihavenoname On: July 02, 2004 23:26 CDT
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Well it's been an interesting? read so far but I hope you don't take some easy way out to try to appeal to fans of S/K or I/K pick one and be done with it otherwise it'll just cheapen the whole thing I'll be reading to see how things go
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Reviewed By: StormAZ [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2004 19:58 CDT
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So, you finally let Kagome find the "power behind the scenes" eh?? You gonna try and find a way for her to "fix" both sides? I can see her and Sessho talking about finding a way to help with some of his spell knowledge. Or jumping back to talk to Kaede. Loved the chapter and I'll be back to see the rest ^_^
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Reviewed By: FoXy_hOtTiE [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2004 15:49 CDT
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update!!!now please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Inuyashalover27 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2004 22:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic!!!!! Please update soon. I love how all the problems came one by one and then they came in to one problem joined with one solution.
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Reviewed By: rommel17 not signed in On: July 01, 2004 21:55 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was a Hell of a lot worse. The Late Brigadier General Ferebe had some reels of those incendiary raids when he was praticing the dive bomb manuever with Paul Tibbets for the Bomb. They were colored reels showing the firestorm of Tokyo. Firestorms are funny as they don't really burn, oh no, most of the damage is done by overpressure as the initial fire sucks up all the oxygen in a vaccum effect. For most of the victims, especially the pleasure quarters, had the lining of their lungs ripped out when they breathed in at the wrong time. The only clue they were dead is the blood from their nose. I seen the same in Nam. The sad thing about the raids were, they had no militarstic value whatsoever. General Lemay just wanted to kill people. He missed entirely the Airfields of Kamikazes and the next day CV Forestal, BB Tennesee, and FF Shanks were hit by those Kamikazes, killing 1,000 of our sailors. As is often the case in war, Generals target the wrong targets thinking that if you kill the populace, the war ends quickly. It doesn't work and only prolongs the war as the fighting men are enraged at the deaths of their families and fight on. Strategic bombing prolonged the war by 12 months. Tactical Bombing would have shortened the war by 15 months. Now the second thing. To change the world, Kagome needs to find and use Oda Nobunaga and the Jesuits. Nippon under Oda Nobunaga saw the birth of modern Gun tactics ahead of Gustavus Adolphus who is credited with the 3 line relay. Had Nobun |
Reviewed By: rommel17 not sign in On: June 30, 2004 09:43 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello again. Still a good line, but however Inu Yasha does have a right to a dominance fight that Sesshoumaru cannot under any circumstances refuse. Just a line. Semper Fi
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Title: I LOVE THIS FIC!!!
Reviewed By: Inuyashalover27 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2004 01:38 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE THIS FIC!!! PLEASE UPDATE ASAP!!!
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Reviewed By: the author know as Artemis On: June 30, 2004 00:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have read your stories and all I have to say about them is this the are revolutionary the whole cube thing if you changed the begin and some of the characters you could publish it and I would buy the book in a new York minuet and have no regrets your stories are well researched and even better written and I am for one honored to have the pleasure of reading them I hope you become a professional author I would certainly look forward to reading any book you write
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Reviewed By: insaneAUTHORESS [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2004 15:46 CDT
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Oh that was a great chapter! I loved Shippo's response and every one meeting each other was great. I loved how you didn't make it seem as though Kagome's mom and grandfather just understood and they still had misgivings. I guess Kagome will eventually have to live on the other side of the well! Or she could get 'home schooled' and do her work on the other side. Well i don't know but keep going!
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Reviewed By: StormAZ [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2004 04:04 CDT
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Wonderful chapter!! ^___^ I love the way you dealt with the customs/security/FBI issues. That was a hoot!! And neither of them actually WANTING to go into the house, but having to ... priceless. Can't wait for the next chapter. That should get really interesting trying to explain everything to mom ^_~ Course, neither one of them know about mom trying to find them soooooo ... hehehe (see, I DO remember SOME things ... um, are you gonna have mom "fess up" about her sneak peak at them??) ^_^
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Title: Yay!
Reviewed By: lazerbeam12345 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2004 20:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am so thrilled that this fic is up! I loved the story Kagome! Where Are You. I can't wait for the next installment! Keep it up!!!!
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Reviewed By: insaneAUTHORESS (not logged in) On: June 26, 2004 01:39 CDT
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Very fun chapter! Im kinda glad hell didn't work out because i definatly want Sesshomaru on the plane! I can't wait for them to get home!
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Reviewed By: StormAZ [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2004 18:30 CDT
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Loved it! And yeah, rommel17 is right, but ... for an initial "introduction" and if she's using the Jedi mind trick also, that's easy to overlook. Besides, they could have just as easily had voice activated recorders in their pockets since you didn't go into as much detail about them as you would have at the beginning of the "Kagome series". And I know, right now, you're just trying to get them home! ^_^ Sessho is getting a crash course in just what it is we have to go through to travel huh? hehe... well, at least it's not as rough as that hell portal ^_~
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Title: WOW
Reviewed By: Saikano On: June 25, 2004 14:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow! i luv ur idea about the whole hell-portal! it was so original! ive been reading kagome where r u and kagomes return and it kills me that these rnt actual episodes! u should definately keep writing! also, i was wondering if kagomes return was going to b long or short? ur amazing! ^_^
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