| "Wandering Souls" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Title: hi again!!!
Reviewed By: Kurai eclipse of evanescense [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2005 16:42 CDT
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It has been a while since I have read your fic, but I just reread it once again and I have to say that it truly is a brilliant fic. I was reminded of this fic when I happened to chance upon one of your other Kuwabara fics located on AFF.net called "In the Dark of the Night"....I just wanted to say it truly is a magnificently well-written fic and I am honestly a big fan of your work. I do hope that you will continue on with both stories, but until then I just wanted to say how much I love and enjoy both of them.
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Reviewed By: Princess Koriand'r On: November 26, 2004 10:38 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know, this has to be my favorite of all the stories you've written. I honestly enjoy the way you portray Kazuma and it's and interesting read. Please update soon and if possible, could I host this story on my site? Give me a holla at Koriandr1@yahoo.com Thanks, Kenya
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Title: OMG
Reviewed By: Kurai eclipse of evanescense [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2004 23:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is amazing!!! this is such a good fic...very intellectual & 4 once showz such a positive aspect of Kuwabara....plz continue!!!!
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Reviewed By: Cliodhna Glen [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2004 19:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
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It's nice to see more exploration of Kuwabara's character. There are a few things, mostly technical, that keep this fic from being the best that it could be. The pacing is a bit off in areas, and the character interactions feel forced in some places. There are a few spelling and grammar errors scattered throughout. I'm certain a solid beta reader could touch this up well for you, and make it a more polished fic. :)
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Reviewed By: kitkat not logged On: August 12, 2004 12:17 CDT
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Ok, here I go again. This time is to ask you to ignore the last paragraph of my last review. the one where i asked you to explain better why the Tantei were treating Kuwabara bad. The thing is that i didn't remember clearly the early chapters and was too lazy to reread them. (Gomen ne!) Now i actually read again chapters 1 and 2 and saw that you already explained the change in attitude through Genkai's words to the girls in chapter 2. Well, now i think i'll leave you alone. I talk way toooo much. ;P
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Reviewed By: yukina189 On: August 11, 2004 23:19 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice I like the method of torture cant wait for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Kitkat [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2004 03:20 CDT
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mm.org is messing the format of my message and the 1500 characters are no help either. hope you manage to comprehend my review. if don't email me and ill send it to you directly.
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Reviewed By: Kitkat [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2004 03:18 CDT
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OMG! was stunned when read who was Kuwa's informant.Thank you!Thank you!I don't know how many times i can say it.never thought i would receive the honour of being in a fic before.*dreammy look in the eyes**bows* think you might like to go to my profile. I was planning to inform in a review that got a gift for you. And use it as incentive for you to post "Redheads at play" on mm.org since aff.net is weird lattely and i'm dying to read more. Anyway, i think this mention of me in your fic is much more than i bargained for. Kitkat PS:took me ages come back here in a regular fashion but now that i know you're also posting here... my review: names of gangs in jap: liked the idea but think red is AKAI,instead of Aka, doesn't matter. Person stalking Kuw:had a suspicion it would be "You know who", but thing with hair got me sidetracked. Good explanation, i would never guess Kuwabara's behaviour and methods of"persuasion": loved him explaining about what people tend to have for granted, specially when he talked about how in one week he improoved so much. And i really liked how he dealed with Hiei. something i'm missing: Why is tantei treating Kuw bad? I mean, at least in portuguese dub version they seen to care for Kuwabara a lot,even Hiei,in a Hiei-like way, but he still cares.Ok i know this is fanfiction so the enviroment doesn't really have to fit the original story, but still i feel like some explanation on why things got to the point they are now would be apreciated.
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Title: Announcement
Reviewed By: Realdrawer80 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2004 17:20 CDT
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¡¡¡07/21/04 BIG FAT ANNOUNCEMENT!!! Katzztar just informed me that he computer went to a better place. We wish it well on its way to cyber heaven. Now regarding her written works of adult nature.... The updates will be slow and the reason is (in her own words) "...I have to use the computer at the library to type the stories as well. Since I can't stay on longer that an hour, then wait an hour to get back on the computer..." I thank all of you who take the time to check reviews.
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Reviewed By: Venomous_Angel_of_Hades [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2004 05:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it you're a great writer this story is great. Poor Kuwabara is forced to kill he would never kill anybody if he didn't have too, but that's the way it is, life is like that forcing you to do what you don't want to. I love the fact that it is about Kuwabara, you find few that portray him well, the way that everyone is portayed is great, for I do hate Kuwabara bashing, and think it unfair to cast him as some stupid oaf. But if I might say to Kuro Guardian, that I am a stupid fangirl but I try to portray them as real as possible, and hopefully I might portray them as well as Katzztar. Anyway I love also how you explain everything to us the reader, and was wondering if you could tell me a sight where they translate English into Japanese if you don't mind going out of your way. This story is truly good, if you could update soon that would be great. Sincerely your new reader, Vaoh Ta Ta For Now
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Reviewed By: Realdrawer80 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2004 18:45 CDT
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See Katzztar? This fic is great! I'd love to say more and spill a few plotline secrets, but you'd kill me enough as it is. -_-¡ Yeah I'm sorry about spilling the pairings everywhere... ^_^ Well I'm off to write more angst and stuff!
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Reviewed By: Bojack727 On: July 12, 2004 12:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this story. I've been a fan of Kuwabara since the Torukane story. This is very well written and I hope you update it soon. I'm glad that someone is giving Kuwabara a story that he deserves. Keep up the good work. Later, -Bojack
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Reviewed By: Kuro Guardian [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2004 09:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one of the more interesting stories I've read on this website. And it is also one of the best I've read that have to do with Kuwabara. And that's not just because most people follow the trend of ridiculing him or overlooking him in favor of his evil twin Kuwabaka. I appreciate how you took the time to actually research the elements you used in this story. I also like the fact that you tried to explain these elements to the reader thus keeping them in the loop. Mostly however I am pleased that you showed the characters more as they are then as they are often protrayed by stupid fangirls. I have only one real compliant... where the heck is the rest of the story?! Cliff hangers are okay but just plain not finishing the story is wrong!!!
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