| "Take me to Heaven: Melfina and Gene" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Title: Still touches my heart.
Reviewed By: staroutlaw91 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2012 09:43 EDT
Comment/Review:
I saw this fanfic years ago and I still love reading it. Outlaw Star is by far my favorite anime and it always will be. As will Melfina and Gene be my favorite couple. Even as years may pass, I'll always remember the series, the couple and your story. Thank you for writing such a fitting story for Melfina and Gene and for us to enjoy. |
Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2010 03:37 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was actually rather beautiful love scene. Very cute ending too. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Draco_king [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2007 21:25 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good! It was a bit short, but I still liked it!Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: mangekyouperv [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2007 01:05 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this was a good fanfic on outlaw star great job
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Title: Take me to Heaven: Melfina and Gene
Reviewed By: shadow_of_the_shades [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2005 02:35 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awwww! That is such a kawaii ending! This was the first Outlaw Star fanfic I've read, and I'm happy that it was yours. I thought is was so cute for Mel to make such bold gestures. I was literallly muttering "Ooh la la" under my breath. lol. ^-^ Keep up the fantastic work, and I hope to read more of your works in the future. Tchao!
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Reviewed By: vegitoth [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2005 18:31 EDT
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This is the very first time I read this fic. Keep up the good work you got a potential.
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Reviewed By: LoveLoveShine [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2005 18:59 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Talk about raging hormones! That was so beautifully written and very descriptive. It was so gentle. Keep it up, you're talented, kid. ~_^ (please don't mind the kid comment, you're probably older than me.)Mmm,Mmm Good.
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Title: Sweet
Reviewed By: greengal48 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2005 13:39 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was great! I've seen the show and always pictured Gene and Mel together. This just illustrates what I thought. Loved the detail and the way you made Gene hesitate. Very nice touch.
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Reviewed By: C.O. On: July 05, 2004 12:49 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
excellent ending, really clinched the whole thin. Loved it.
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Reviewed By: Battleaxe185 On: June 20, 2004 15:30 EDT
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CUTE! Loved it ^^ Very nicely done, and in character, even if it did seem a bit rushed. :) Great story, and keep it up! Loved it!
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Reviewed By: Zelix [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2004 09:05 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good, i finished watching the entire Outlaw star series a little while ago and i must say, this fic was so good! Keep it up, you're a good writer!
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