| "Chasing Destiny" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: blaboy On: April 03, 2005 18:46 CDT
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Hey... are you alive? You haven't updated this fic in about 9 months.... .... Oh well... okay.. so the review goes as: I've read the story as far, and I can already see several tensions arising from the situation, such as Ranma/Ami when Ranma did that 'promise' with Mina (is she the same girl as the one Ami knows?) and then the Ryoga/Rei... both are hot-tempered so I can see why you would do that... I like where you're going with this story and just wish you would update soon!
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Reviewed By: blaboy On: April 03, 2005 18:46 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hey... are you alive? You haven't updated this fic in about 9 months.... .... Oh well... okay.. so the review goes as: I've read the story as far, and I can already see several tensions arising from the situation, such as Ranma/Ami when Ranma did that 'promise' with Mina (is she the same girl as the one Ami knows?) and then the Ryoga/Rei... both are hot-tempered so I can see why you would do that... I like where you're going with this story and just wish you would update soon!
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Reviewed By: darkwoofe [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2004 01:44 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice work! I really hope to see more of this story soon
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Reviewed By: Gopu On: June 29, 2004 17:51 CDT
Comment/Review:
Great story so far.
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Reviewed By: Usagi-kun [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2004 03:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I found myself enjoying this quite a bit. keep up the exellent story telling. You make a boring day a bit more bearable with this.
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Reviewed By: Chi Vayne On: June 20, 2004 16:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good job. You have integrated SM and Ranma well. Please continue
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Title: Chapter 1/Prologue
Reviewed By: WarpWizard [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2004 11:03 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pretty good, if standard. I'd read more.
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Reviewed By: Lord_Raa [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2004 13:24 CDT
Comment/Review:
Two things stood out at to me as I read this. 1) you are missing speech marks and 2) caps lock was on for the last quarter of the chapter. Aside from that, I thought that this was entertaining enough to warrant its continuation.
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Reviewed By: José de Castro On: June 18, 2004 13:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
The story is nice enough until now, way better than most Ranma/SM fanfics out there. But... - your CAPS LOCK key is stuck; - the quotes " " for dialogs are missing; - there are some minor grammar errors. Corrected these ones, you're ready to make a great impression!
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Reviewed By: The Master [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2004 09:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love chapter 1 it was great. Keep those chapters coming. You are an artist.
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