Reviewed By: TheEvilOne69 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2004 11:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow Ezri, it is very good, but what can I expect, all your work is fantastic, but I noticed that you edited a large chunk of it for this site, You shouldn't do that, because the work was perfect as it was, it's sort of like self censership, you shouldn't get discouraged, it wasn't to graphic, it was awesome, and if someone has to be immature about it, they can just go away, I do sugest you put the chunk back in, but it is your story and It is still very great, none the less!!! Neways keep up the good work.
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