| "Game Of Deceit" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Title: Update?
Reviewed By: jhoney [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2005 14:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey there. How's it going? Just wondering if you'd abandoned this story because I was totally into it. HOpe you had a good holiday! Ciao!
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Reviewed By: AngelMaeChan On: September 05, 2004 20:52 CDT
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I'm really sorry I didn't review sooner!! Between my drivers ed course and being a senior in High School I haven't had much time to do anything!! The chapter was fantastic, as always, so please update soon! I must know what happens next!
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Reviewed By: anubiset [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2004 18:09 CDT
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Ummm...wow. This is amazing. So who was at the window? This is almost like a soap opera. I love soap operas. Hope you update soon.
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Title: Aww, don't say that...
Reviewed By: Yami no Jean On: August 18, 2004 17:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aww...don't say that gal. I still thiink this story's doing fine. I wanna know what you're gonna do next with "rememberng your love"^~*
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Reviewed By: RyokoMink [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2004 19:44 CDT
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Really... This fic amuses me a lot. At first I was all like, 'Yugi?! Bakura?! Together?! That's absurd!' Then I was all like, 'Yup. That's how Bakura would act.' Honestly I can't see Bakura being too nice to others but what you did was exactly how I would picture something odd and bizzare like this. Oh, I can't wait till you write more! Ja! ^_^
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Title: Hot! Hot! Hot!
Reviewed By: jhoney [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2004 11:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes! Love it love it love it! Looking forward to more. Oh the angst, the sex, the drama! Wonderful combos too ^_~*
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Reviewed By: AngelMaeChan On: August 04, 2004 19:24 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! Another great chapter!! ^.^ You are doing a wonderful job, please update as soon as you have the chance!
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Reviewed By: The Panasonic Princess (too lazy to log in) [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2004 11:50 CDT
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Yay! Yaoi! I'm so glad you decided to try your hand at yaoi. I think this is a very good story, kinda soap opera-ish (then again, who doesn't love soaps?). I'm happy oyu reviewed my own story! Thanks a lot! Well... I gotta go. E-mail me some time! the_panasonic_princess@yahoo.com. ~Maybe we can collab! *The Panasonic Princess*
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Reviewed By: AngelMaeChan On: July 30, 2004 18:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good! A friend of mine read this and recomended it to me, I don't think she reviewed, but she said it was really good. And I agree!! I hope to see more soon!
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Reviewed By: White Fanged Wolf [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2004 00:22 CDT
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Well, I like the original title. But either way, it is still a cool story!! Hehe, I am glad the you liked the e-mail and the review. I am just glad that I found your stories, because I REALLY, REALLY Like them sooooooo very much. They make me happy...and that is always a good thing! Well, I am glad that you get to go on a vacation. LOTS of writting time!!! Woohoo!
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Reviewed By: white fanged wolf [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2004 12:36 CDT
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Uhhhh-ohhhh spageti-o's, is that how you spell it? Hum, that is how I spelled it when I was younger, and that is how it will stay! Yugi is sooo busted!! Yami jumps him. Actually, that would make me laugh, have him be all angry and then get a four-sum with him, Yugi, Seto, and Bakura. That would just make my day....*lolls off into own world*
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Title: yami-shi-tenshi
Reviewed By: yami-shi-tenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2004 11:20 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeah Im the first to review I love it a lemon in the first chapter (squeal) more pleasewrite more !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: Write more please
Reviewed By: Aria Lerendeair [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2004 10:02 CDT
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This story has intrigued me. I want to know what is going to happen, especially if Yugi and Yami are going to end up together! And if you ever need help with anything feel free to give me an email: footballpyro777@yahoo.com I really enjoyed the story so far and I can't wait to see what you are going to write about Bakura's reaction. I for one think it will be priceless! I am anxiously awaiting until your next update, so make it soon! Please make it soon, I do despise the people who take forever to update, even though I am one of them. In the future, look for some Yu-Gi-Oh fics that I have written. I just need to get them typed up and then I will post them! Love ya, Aria
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