| "my anime road trip of chaos" Reviews/Comments [ 146 ] |
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Reviewed By: Terra Mecca Solace [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2004 22:47 CDT
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oops I meant to say "she doesn't need to use anything more powerful than Dokkasu unless needed" And I want more Sesshoumaru and Terra smut! *snorts* lol please?
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Reviewed By: Terra Mecca Solace [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2004 22:44 CDT
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You know Ukaran doesn't really have a motive so I think it should be that he wants Miko to himself and he met her before as someone else. Hence he has lived a long time and miko was reborn from someone he wanted. Since I suggested this idea! whoot my small part. I used to serve naraku until I met Sesshoumaru! whoot I was not over powered but merely in a state if I don't do this, this person will die crap. So I kill myself and Sesshoumaru revives me and blah blah. Miko is very important to Ukaran and he HATES Terra for helping kill Naraku. oh yeah and my whip has been upgraded to all my fingers, so when i summon it five whips from my fingers wrap around the enemy and kill it no matter what. Mostly Terra fights with Dokkasu because she does need to use anything more powerful than that with her skills but if need will rarely use something else. Any more ideas you need for the plot ask me and i'll think of some!! ^_^ update soon!
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Reviewed By: KyoKyo866 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2004 20:00 CDT
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yah.. i did make this story poupular didn't i? i'm so happy-^^-.. anyways.. i.. don't have any ideas.. BUT I'LL THINK OF SOME DON'T YOU WORRY!!.. sry.. i get a little too exicted some times.. but a question bothers me.. why do you want to be with miko and only her? why not others.. god this is confusing..
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Title: note to yamifanner
Reviewed By: diablodude [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2004 17:38 CDT
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to yamifanner: i will give you an ivy blade (i know what it looks lik and what it can do i have the game for gamecube) but i will give you a better type. second, yes you and yami can......show your emothions,three if i can i would make everyone a main character but as i said before, i can remeber only so many people out of 23, now gonna be 25 in chapter 23 which i am now making along with ch 24. and lastly, yes i will put sapphire in and miko will not stop seeing yami BUT she will not bug him.....sorta, if she does i'll help yami out. shane.
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Title: YES! Plus background
Reviewed By: Jidus [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2004 17:14 CDT
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Thanks for the fight with my evil twin, and whenever he comes I fight. Of course I'll fight anyone who opposes me or my friends, family, and lover. But the start of us having the sibling rivalry was becuase of our father. He liked me and the others the most cause we killed all who opposed our family, while one of my brothers (Jidarus) just sat and watched, getting cheap shots and the like. Basically he was a weakling, but now were both always at the same level of power, speed, and strength. But I always pull something unexpected on him at the end of our fight, but I mostly use Darkness Wave (Like the Backlash Wave but a little more devestating and destructive.) Hope you update soon.
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Reviewed By: Yamifanner [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2004 16:16 CDT
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Shane, I forgive you that my character isn't talking much. Hey, can you make some of the people,including me, to be main characters throughout the story? Hey, can my yami come in the story? Her name is Sapphire. She has golden brown hair and sea green eyes. She is in love with the evil Marik. Hope you update soon.
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Reviewed By: Yamifanner [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2004 16:11 CDT
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Can I change my weapon? Instead of a crystal katana, I want a Ivy Blade (like the one Ivy has in Soul Calibur 2 game). Also, can me and Yami express our feelings for each other about how much we love each other? Pretty please. The shane/miko pairing is beautiful because you both make a good couple in the story. One more thing, can you have miko not bug Yami anymore?
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Title: I'm back!
Reviewed By: Master Duelist Kaori [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2004 15:49 CDT
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I'm back! Yay! Sorry about not reveiwing for a long time, I've been busy and my computer sometimes doesn't show certain things up. Anyways great chapters!! But it seems your getting into more fighting battle things, and don't want to be a bother and I want to be able to protect myself and others so... I'll send you my fighting form! lol, you don't have to use it but it would be nice, anyways same description cept I'm a hanyou! ha ho! lol, anyways somehow I get really mad and my hair gets light blue streaks in it, and two dark blue stripes appear on each cheek. Now my powers would be ice and healing, also I have a huge silver sword w/ stars on, when I combine my sword attack with my power over ice then 'Frozen Star Strike' happens, which I would jump up on the enemy, slice them in half but when my sword is inside them a frezing white light comes out and like a white frozen star explodes. One thing I really like is healing abilty, I can't bring back people from the dead, but very very close to I can. Well thats all, just wanted to review because I haven't been able to in a while.
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Reviewed By: peachgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2004 15:44 CDT
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nice
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Title: I'm back!!!
Reviewed By: Master Duelist Kaori [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2004 15:34 CDT
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Reviewed By: Terra Mecca Solace [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2004 14:51 CDT
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O_O IN THE SHOW YAMI LIKES TEA???? OMG?! if it's true I really have to start watching again! whoot intense chapter
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Reviewed By: peachgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2004 06:31 CDT
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Hooray! Two more chapters! Keep going! This story just gets better
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Title: Opps!
Reviewed By: Jidus [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2004 22:42 CDT
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I'm sorry Shane his name his Jidarus Conevil and yes I agree with your deal.
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Title: oops
Reviewed By: diablodude [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2004 22:40 CDT
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i mean chapter 21 not 2
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Title: note for jidus
Reviewed By: diablodude [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2004 22:38 CDT
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jidus: in chapter 2, i will let you becom a raptor demon, and i will let your brother join ukaran (naraku spelled backwards) but i just need his name he will b using in the fan fic. oh yeah, i am also a master of darkness, like i said i am very strong, stronger than most in shadow magic/darkness, but i would still allow u to fight ur brother, seeing as he is a member of family, but i would watch from the sidelines, making sure nothing hppend. deal? i can still counter his magic tho seeing as i always traind, so is it a deal? shane.
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