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| "my anime road trip of chaos" Reviews/Comments [ 146 ] | | Pages (10): [ « < 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 > » ] | Reviewed By: Terra Mecca Solace [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2004 17:45 CDT
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OOPS! I meant to say that just because she doesn't show her true extent doesn't mean that people can't easily see that is very powerful yuppers...UPDATE
| Reviewed By: Terra Mecca Solace [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2004 17:42 CDT
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Terra Mecca is the split bitch side of Terra. Remember when Terra is Terra Mecca she becomes very seductive with everything and is super intelligent. Her power is almost too powerful to be called good. (although she is not known to be stronger then Shane I guess because she refuses to show her true extent AT ALL but that doesn't mean that it isn't easy to tell that she is) btw awesome chappy! I think it's so cute with the miko/shane thing going on
| Title: Remix
Reviewed By: Terra Mecca Solace [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2004 17:38 CDT
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I thought it would easier to see what Terra looks like in demon form and how she acts. DEMON: Dog Demon HT: 5'8 Hair stays the same. EYES: Peircing gold with tiny lavender flecks Grows long claws with designs on them. CLOTHES: A black skin suit under a blood red kimono. Wears bracers on hands and same boots as Sesshoumaru ATTACKS: MALICE REIGNING: Literally stabs the victim through and when takes it out the victims insides eat away at each other and collapse. INFERNAL TERRA: Wraps energy whip around victim and constricts it slicing them up. DOKKASU: Sesshoumaru's poison flower Claw. Personality: Terra but revamped. Seductive to either gender, Terribly dangerous and powerful. Although Terra Mecca is the opposite of the normal terra she is still kind and caring but shows alot more intelligence. SHOW ME OFF IN THE NEXT CHAPPY PLEASE!
| Reviewed By: KyoKyo866 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2004 17:18 CDT
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i don't mind.. really.. i don't. but it still confusies me.. why didn't miko go after kyokyo.. oh well.. and i don't mind if you used the bow and arrows.. as long as Miko can still see yami sometimes.. you can do the pairings^^ great chapter! write more soon! Ciao!
| Reviewed By: Yamifanner [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2004 16:31 CDT
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Thank you for the gift. Now Yami is separated from Yugi now. I hope Kyokyo doesn't get mad at you for changing your pairing. Ja ne.
| Reviewed By: peachgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2004 15:39 CDT
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I knew I forgot something... I really like the power of earth! Awsome chapter!
| Title: first time reveiwing myself
Reviewed By: diablodude [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2004 10:30 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*sweat drops* ummm, okay i admit it, my character IS falling for miko and he DOES have acrush on her okay!? there i said it. now stop bugging me about it!! to kyokyo: sorry, but in the next chapter it will start to b a shane/miko pairing instead of shane/naru. sorry 4 any inconvenience. shane.
| Reviewed By: AMK [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2004 07:56 CDT
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*singsong voice* Shane's got a cru-ush! Shane's got a cru-ush! Shane and Miko sitting in a tree, k-i-s-s-i-n-g! Okay, I'll stop. I think I'm enjoying myself a little too much. ^^ I don't want any special powers... I'm just a human girl... with a killer right hook when I need it. ^^ No powers for me though. *singing* No powers for me, no powers for meeee- I feel like singing today! And I don't know why! *walks off humming*
| Reviewed By: peachgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2004 20:39 CDT
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Name: Peach Age: 16 Hair color: pale pink, goes down to her shoulders eye color: lilac height: 5'6'' clothes: A denim short sleeve shirt, khaki capris, birkenstock sandals; red halter top, denim mini skirt. black short sleeve shirt, really short khaki shorts. personality: extremely nice person, smart, sometimes a bit crazy. paired with: Kouga I like the story! keep up the good work!
| Title: oops my bad 2
Reviewed By: Chaos Damn It [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2004 10:12 CDT
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continued/ When word of mouth about Christianity and the lands to the far west reached the ears of Zephyr, his hope was renewed, and he set out across to his parents homeland, and to the great world beyond... /Description of Zephyr and his abilities/ An unassuming person, Zephyr stands a an uncommon 6'4. With a medium build, Zephyr looks exactly as he was raised, with the form of a constantly active person. Though his original nationality is unknown, his fair skin tone suggests that his is not of lands to the East, and may be of Germanic decent. His hair is short, brown and untamed; matching his usual disheveled appearance, yet his calm grass green eyes belie his inner tranquility. Also complementing his misshapen appearance, Zephyrs attitude is aloof and carefree, and he is just happy to be alive in the world, able to do what he can to better himself and others. His persona is not to be taken at a glance though, for if there is a time to be serious, he shall follow through with any situation to its finality. Zephyr does not know how to fight, but given that he was trained in the mental realm of peace from the time that he was able to comprehend being alive, Zephyr has an innate ability to expand his physical limits beyond that of any ordinary person, and is able to use an inexplicable array of almost god like powers (be imaginative, create something cool). None of this know to him though, and he only knows that he is stronger, faster, and tougher than anyone he has ever met. | Title: ooops, my bad
Reviewed By: Chaos Damn It [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2004 09:44 CDT
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Sorry about that last review, mistake on my part... Anyways, I haven't read any of your chapters, but I do have ideas that I am willing to give, and thought that I might as well hand em out while I'm in the mood. So here it goes for my character/plot ideas: Zephyr never had an easy life. Born to unknown parents, he was left by the side of the road for dead. The rain poured down as he screeched for his mother and father, a striking noise that sent a dagger of pity and sorrow through the hearts of a passing Hindu family. The middle-aged mother and father, along with their 5-year-old daughter, stopped and rescued the poor infant, thereafter adopting him in to their family. As migrants to Japan from their native land of India, the Balam (last name of the family who adopted Zephyr) raised the boy from infant to adult to help with rice harvesting. But the Balam did not stop with mere physical development, they eked further with his mind, setting in stone his beliefs in Hinduism and his goal for peace of soul, mind, and if at all possible the world. Zephyr grew to be a very strong, proud, and wise young man, and at the age of 25 left the only home that he had ever know to start out on a grand journey. Having lived in Japan all of his life, Zephyr was quite familiar with the landscape, and in no less than five years he managed to traverse the whole country by foot. Yet his search for enlightenment ran dry until he was introduced to foreign religions. (continued in next review)
| Title: why the hell not
Reviewed By: Chaos Damn It [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2004 09:19 CDT
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| Title: *scratch scratch*
Reviewed By: Terra Mecca Solace [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2004 23:21 CDT
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It's really wierd when i'm just a human...BAH I wanna be a bitch like in all of the other stories i'm in! LOL basically a Very powerful Inu demoness. Yuppers I'm always a powerful retarded inu demon, doesn't mean that i'm not able to be cold snappy and smart! Usually I'm just happy and stupid. Terra has always been a very seductive demon but is usually chipper and happy. YAY I liked that chappy! Update soon!
| Reviewed By: KyoKyo866 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2004 21:34 CDT
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nice.. very great chapter.. make more soon^^
| Reviewed By: KyoKyo866 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2004 17:43 CDT
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oh yes.. and uh.. oh yah.. Miko can also become evil by her beam.. sometimes it back fires on herself. and you can tell if she became evil if her eyes turn blood red.. her WHOLE eyes.. no other colors showing in them.. like that yah. and lemme tell you this.. PLZ LET HER USE IT ON THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!.. example.. a ginat monster no one can beat.. not even u and bane.. so she uses the beam thingy.. and she becomes evil and attacvks kyokyo pretty badly.. yup.. always lost of blood on KyoKyo.. 25 blood transfers a month for her.. yah.. its true.. *nods* anyways.. plz make the chapters sooner^^
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