| "Urgent Call" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
Reviewed By: Blackrosethorn On: March 11, 2005 22:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked it. Cute ,funny,just what I needed.I would greatly aprecate it if you would continue the story or just write the one where Trize(Please excuse me if I spelt it wrong) is the father.
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Title: Urgent call
Reviewed By: Tashia On: November 28, 2004 05:17 CST
Comment/Review:
HI! I love this story and I'm sad to see it end.I would like to see a sequel cause this story was great.Also i wouldnt mind that other story either.It seems as if it would be very interesting from that little preview of it that we had.Anyways u did a great job and keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: ScytheMarquis On: August 12, 2004 16:33 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked this fic. It could have been a bit more indepth and drawn out. It does however, warrent a sequel, so I do hope you're inspired to write one. Quite entertaining :)
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Reviewed By: j_mame-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2004 13:02 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yes please continue with that story and this story was lovely as well.well write more soon please ja ne!^_^
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Reviewed By: SomaliChan On: July 14, 2004 09:10 CDT
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I really wonder how Zechs is going to react seeing Heero with his daughter. I just hope that he doesn't screw things up too badly. I usually love 1X2X1. However, I like to read other pairing as well. Hmm.......13x1 or 6x1 are pretty rare pairings. So I say......more!!!!
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Reviewed By: Mite Mite [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2004 08:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please continue both stories! At the moment I have a thing for weird anyonex1 stories and a Heero preggers fics. And you have made me a Happy Persone by rolling both factiors into one! And because of that, you get a cookie!
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Reviewed By: GoldenRat [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2004 21:22 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
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I really like the story line of this fic. But...the writing's a little simplistic. The characters are all kind of flat/2D. Please don't take this the wrong way, it just that compared to your other fics, this just isn't as emotioanlly powerful.
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Reviewed By: unicorn1979 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2004 14:58 CDT
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Great story so far. Keep writting i cannot wait to find out what happenes. Does Duo know that Zech is the father?It sounded like he did.Keep writting ^_^
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Reviewed By: SomaliChan On: July 12, 2004 07:34 CDT
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Heheh I was wondering how you are going to slip in the part about Heero being a parent to Une. Hehe afterall she has to knwo some time. Hm.......I wonder if Zech will remember that one night with Heero *grins* More????
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Reviewed By: SomaliChan On: July 11, 2004 05:03 CDT
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This is the first preggy fic that I read that the pregnancy was pretty much over in the first two chapters! *grins* Though it does make for an interesting read as to how Heero is going to cope with his parenthood *grins* More?!
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Reviewed By: Ulysses On: July 10, 2004 16:27 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Great story so far. Love the way you portray Duo and Heero. Please keep it up!!
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Title: Urgent Call
Reviewed By: Weissangel24 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2004 09:46 CDT
Comment/Review:
I'm enjoying this fic very much, Please update soon. ^-^ Weissangel24
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Reviewed By: GoldenRat [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2004 16:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, so far so good. This fic seems like it's going to very interesting. Can't wait to find out how Heero got pregnant. Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: lil_yapper On: July 07, 2004 12:58 CDT
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oh wow! i never read anything like that before, can't wait to see what happens next!
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