Reviewed By: YamiYaiba [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2004 01:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm surprised that you haven't gotten any reviews. Your writing is excellent. It is gramatically sound, the syntax is (for the most part) excellent, and the plot line is pretty good. You do, however, have a tendency to rush the sex scenes. They seem...unimportant. Now that I think about it, they are. But I'm a pervert so...you know. Keep it up! I can't wait for the end.
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