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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: July 12, 2004 15:52 CDT
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Rating(s): Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I know this review should be longer ..But I'm really in a hurry ,So I'll just say I red this chapter and really liked it and please update again soon so I can read more...Thank you for updating...
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: July 12, 2004 15:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I know this review should be longer ..But I'm really in a hurry ,So I'll just say I red this chapter and really liked it and please update again soon so I can read more...Thank you for updating...
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Reviewed By: Dyna D On: July 12, 2004 13:01 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a fantastic story. I was snared the moment I began reading it. I don't know if someone could really survive what Wufei did; it makes him appear beyond human to even be alive. But his emotional reactions seemed correct, not only to what happened to him in Russia, but to his rejection by society and former comrades. Even a few typos couldn't distract from the overall storytelling. Thanks for the hours of chair-gripping reading.
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Reviewed By: Cephalanthus [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2004 20:31 CDT
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Wai! Please do continue this fic-- with all the lovely, lovely angst. I am captivated; I simply must read more. Brava.
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Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2004 23:24 CDT
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Wow - my heart's breaking for Wufei. This is a concept that I haven't read yet and it's promising to be another wonderful Lethanon fic. (I just hope it'll end on a happy note for him, not like Apathetic.) Trowa's revelation was pitiful, but I'm so glad he's acting on it. It's going to be interesting to see what kind of relationship Marie has in this fic. I like your portrayal of her - she and Wufei are definitely kindred spirits.
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Reviewed By: Fire of Phoenix On: July 09, 2004 13:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I felt Wufei's pain while I was reading this because I know how it feels to be ignored by ones friends. But I'm confused as to why Preventers moved Wufei down to sub-level 7 and why he's always given missions that no-one else knows about and why he has no paper work for his missions and that Wufei practically doesn't exist on the Preventer's database. I hope you update so I can understand what's happening to my solitary dragon.
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