| "Love Hina: Change of Life" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Title: simply... beautiful!
Reviewed By: ILoveHina On: August 16, 2005 18:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
geez, when the hell are you going to update this awesome story?! I need to get my love hina! Anyways, awesome story. A little heavey on the haruka and seta relationship. But I was always in love with naru/kei relationship fics. You could use a little bit more detail in the facial expressions of the characters, or what they are feeling, just to paint a more vivid picture of what is happening. Overall though, you did a splendid job and will need to write more lest someone finds you and forces you to. :P
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Title: Awesome!
Reviewed By: Zefrn [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2004 22:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved Change of Heart and I love where you are taking this. I just recently found Love Hina and it's rather sick, but I am addicted to it. I've been reading and re-reading so much that I have begun my own little writing project. Please, continue the story soon!
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Title: I need more damnit!
Reviewed By: evil_monkey89 On: September 05, 2004 19:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
I've read the Manga and own a few of the anime's and I think this is the best fan fic i've read. You actually stay true to the story. I want more though this is awesome and i want kitsune to be funnier to relieve, the well stress of the story.You keep up the good work.
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Title: cool
Reviewed By: kasumi the vampire queen [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2004 22:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very good job, one thing that i'd like to comment is about the size of your chapters there not to long and there not to short either great job^_^
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