| "Nabiki Reborn = The Orginal Version" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Title: Please say it isnt so.
Reviewed By: Tokomaru [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2010 09:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey i don't know if you plan to continue this story but I personally think you should it is an amazing work of art and so far the story is coming into its own as a new type of epic story. The plot is original which not to many authors can say for their work but you came up with something truly unique. Everything about it to me seems to say that it will be a touching and emotional story yet it has the potential to have boundless amount of action with how you integrated Ki and Mana to work on almost the same spectrum. I will be looking forward to hearing if this story has been reopened and started up again if not I find myself feeling that your forethought and creativity that went into this would be epic to be sorely missed. I know that as we are fans and do not have the right to ask of your time I still find myself hoping ,even though your not being paid for these ,that you will find your creativity or something that will help you want to continue to write this story. One of Your Fans Tokomaru Kage Kitsune Solmaru326
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Reviewed By: datacraver On: October 28, 2004 05:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great story. Keep it up. Datacraver
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Title: Now this is the one I loved
Reviewed By: LordThom [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2004 09:24 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Now this is the one I was talking about in my review of the re-write. Please continue this one if you get the chance as well as the re-write. I honestly love this story
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