| "Forgiveness" Reviews/Comments [ 44 ] |
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Reviewed By: Beysie [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2004 22:48 CDT
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Oh, you haven't updated this one in a while, and it's getting to a very interesting part! You left this as a cliffie, Nooooooo! Please, update this one again, and soon? I'm on the edge of my seat in anticipation!
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Reviewed By: Niffe_24 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2004 16:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was pretty good!! I can't wait to see another chapter!!
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Reviewed By: Obsessed On: September 05, 2004 00:24 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Excellent...cant wait for the next chappie!
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Reviewed By: angelbaby [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2004 15:37 CDT
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Hope the next chapter is 'Forgiveness'. I'm glad you updated. Please continue.
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Reviewed By: angelbaby [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2004 15:08 CDT
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Nooooooo, Yugi has to forgive Yami. I want some Yami/Yugi/Seto action, Now! Yugi just has to forgive Yami soon. Please, I can't take it anymore. PLeeeeeeaaaasse.
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Reviewed By: LadySaturnGirl On: August 06, 2004 11:39 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Definitely sexier here than on fanfiction.net. You did a great job w/ the yaoi between Yami & Seto. Anyway, later!
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Reviewed By: Tange On: August 05, 2004 19:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great update loved it but hope Yugi comes to his senses soon and stops wanting to kill the pharaoh update again soon and is their anymore lemons coming soon?
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Title: Excellent
Reviewed By: Obsessed On: August 01, 2004 00:34 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just one word : Fantastic! Please update soon... I'll be waiting!(you are SUCH a good writer0
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Reviewed By: angelbaby [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2004 13:07 CDT
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I can't believe I haven't reviewed yet. I have you on my favorite fanfics, but I have yet to review. I just realized that. Anyway, this is great. I'm truly enjoying it. I hope Yugi will come around soon. I want to see some Yami/Yugi/Seto action. Yeah, baby. Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Pharaohs Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2004 02:36 CDT
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Yay you updated i am reviewing on this site since fanfic is acting weird and wont let me look at it anyways yay Yugi showed up and glad he is feeling bad and excellent writing in this chapter and the past of Grandpa getting the puzzle was really good anyways two more lemons awesome cant wait to read them and the next chapter of this as well.
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Reviewed By: Pharaohs Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2004 00:10 CDT
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Hey that was really good hope you update again soon and cant wait to see Yugi in it again. The lemon was really interesting i like it.
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Reviewed By: Yami=Uber-Seme On: July 21, 2004 02:57 CDT
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Woot Woot!, YOU ROCK. Keep up the good work, and make Yami seme!.
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Reviewed By: anubiset On: July 19, 2004 16:38 CDT
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I love this. It is very immagitive.You are an excellent writer.
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Reviewed By: michew [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2004 10:48 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMFG!!! THIS IS AMAZING!!! plz update soon!!! ^_^
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