Title: Good, but...
Reviewed By: Whyte Shadow [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2004 23:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic has been enjoyable so far - the spelling and grammar are sound for the most part, you use descriptive detail, and it's more than different enough from the series to merit reading. However, scene transitions could use a little more clarity in some places, particularly the end of Chapter Four, and the generic Digimon could use a little more description. And...yeah, the 'Whose Line Is It Anyway?' segments could use a little work. Other than that, I don't really have any problem with things. Good luck! =^.^=
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